| Reviews for The Cute Adorable Thing That Fell Into My Lap |
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   Lo Behold chapter 2 . 8/26/2007 ah oh no! thats crazy plan on reading more. ] keep up the good work |
| yaoilover93 chapter 6 . 6/1/2007 i love the story please write more |
| zeeda chapter 4 . 10/15/2006 way kawaii. |
| zeeda chapter 3 . 10/15/2006 Don't doubt was pretty good,ne? |
| DysprosiumOxide chapter 6 . 10/8/2006 e! that story was soo good! i loved it! moremoremore! |
| j0wey chapter 6 . 8/30/2006 aw! KAWAII ! _ i shall read onward! |
| jka1 chapter 6 . 8/27/2006 *squealing* i have to agree with riku, sora is just so cute - |
| akatsuki-NIN-itachi chapter 6 . 8/17/2006 it was good i love the story |
| ZombieRachelLOVESZombieQuinn chapter 6 . 8/15/2006 Lol, it wasn't a boring chapter. it just seem ed like a filler chapter, it wasn't bad though, it was still pretty good. update soon! |
| Dusty's Chocobo chapter 6 . 8/15/2006 LMAO Too hilarious. Sora wanting to be on top. I'm still loving this story so far please update soon. |
| hm chapter 6 . 8/15/2006 You know, if you want to be a writer that people actually respect and see as someone who is intelligent, I highly suggest that you stop being so lazy that you can't even add simple quotation marks, and make this story somewhat decent so that your readers can tell the difference between dialogue and description. I'm extremely surprised with myself that I read this far into your story. You truly have interesting ideas and descriptions but you REALLY need to take the effort to proofread and make it a real story! This is not a flame, just VERY constructive criticism. I know it must feel like I'm making fun of you, but I think you would be great if you really tried. Please take my advice, you badly need it. |
| the white rose 01 chapter 6 . 8/15/2006 Interesting chapter. So Sora will be on the top that is going to be different. I hope you update soon |
| dead edged blade chapter 5 . 8/3/2006 lol Amusing as heck! |
| akatsuki-NIN-itachi chapter 5 . 7/27/2006 this is really good i like it please update ASAP please! |
| MewMewstreet chapter 5 . 7/6/2006 Yeah! More chapters! |
