That was the best Harry & Snape interaction I have ever read, please continue!

Can you please write another chapter.

mmmm

Kaito is hungry wants to eat

HP/SS ,please! )

Ahh, gomen. I just realised that you had spelt massacre properly on this chapter. Maybe go back and fix the previous chapter's mistake?

Ano... Chosha-san, I'm pretty sure when you wrote 'The Death Eater Masicure', you meant it as in the indiscriminate mass-murder of Death Eaters, ne? Demo I'mpretty sure that it's spelt 'massacre'. Thank you for this story!

In a more calmed manner, might I add that to get in the Ravenclaw Common Room, you have to answer a riddle given by a knocker which takes the shape of the head of an eagle, if I remember correctly. I honestly believe Celestin would have liked that considering his pique over odd passwords. I love how Celestin was sorted into Ravenclaw (seeing as I am sorted into Ravenclaw by Pottermore myself). He would have had been in an easier position to stay away from the house rivalry and side to no one - a trait which I read from fan fictions in such ardour. Though to be quite honest, I would not recommend giving Celestin someone to be with. He himself said that he has a job to do and having someone to be with him by his side would not be an advantage for him. In the canon books, he broke up with Ginny so she wouldn't be used by Voldemort to get to him. I think this is a trait Celestin would have kept considering that he is more aware of the weight of the burden of the Wizarding World on his shoulder. No, I adhere to the idea that Celestin should not be with anyone seriously. Though I do not disagree of Celestin being a flirty son of a bitch - well, in a unknowingly sort of way. I would think Celestin would be the kind to tease a girl at some sorts and be amused with both Blaise and Daphne (platonically so, of course, and they would hit him in the head for even trying so). Oh Merlin, I wrote too much.

NOOO WHY IS THIS NOT FINISHED AHUHUHUHUHUHUHU!?
SORRY FOR BEING SELFISH BUT THIS FIC IS TOO GOOD TOO GOOD
IVE BEEN LAUGHING, AND SNIGGERING ON MY OWN FOR THE PAST HOUR AND A HALF
THIS FIC MUST NOT BE OVER PLEASEEE

I wonder how long till someone attempts to slip Celestin a potion to weaken his mental barriers?

In the books the Ravenclaw tower was protected by a riddle asking door knocker that is a bird's head.

Where are all of Celestin's weapons?

The bandanna was knocked off...but was his scar or anything else identified? What about the wound he took, did he leave traces of his blood behind that could be used to identify him?

A great big chunk of the dialog between Snape and Harry was stolen from S'Tarkans "Harry Potter and the Nightmares of Futures Past" chapter 3. You don't even have the good grace of giving credit. If you are so willing to steal that part i don't even want to know how much else of this story was puzzled together with stolen chunks of other peoples writings.
Please take this down, at the very lest the stolen part.

This is my favourite fanfiction ever and I've read quite a lot of stories. What a shame would it be if you abandoned this... I'd really like to know what happens. Marius is such an interesting character as well. I'll be following and watching, if something happens with the story.

THIS IS LIKE .. BLOODING AMAZING PLEASE FINISH IT PLEEEEEAAAASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP! w

Good story. There are few errors, and I like the concept.