Please update. When will Jake and Rose finally meet?

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good job the story is good so far. Please update as soon as you can.

This story is really good, i hope you put more chapters in it.

(CHANGE OF VIEWPOINT CAUSE IF I DIDN’T WRITE THIS IT WOULD BE TOO HARD FOR AMDRAGON TO WORK IT OUT)

XD ROFL LOL

Ok anyways, I can give you the exact though that ran through grandpa's mind when they saw there was no Jake. "DOH" XD

Good chapter and great cliffhanger!

cool.

Jake is so busted! This chapter's great!

Is Morass a word? Other than that good section, but you forgot to put a divider so the two points of view kinda ram together. Next time dont forget a star, or a line or something. Anyways, way to keep the suspension up.

I have but 1 complaint, it is spelled BUM not Bumb. Otherwise, how does Cutter know so much? Will this be explained.

That guy is scary. How did he know all that? Let's see Jake's reaction to Rose not being six feet under. Great chap! Update soon, plz!

he's insane. ok, let's bring on jake!

Good going so far, you're periods,you're occasional typos and such... -sighs- 't feel bad or of times my words can get bunched together it drives me bananas! .Bananas.B-a-n-a-n-a-s!Thanks Gwen. But seriously,this was a very nice yet when U can.

LP

" All Flames are welcome, but will be thrown onto those barrels of oil you are standing next to!." What flames dudem this is sAwesome. Good intro and good luck!

Wow! That was great. I always wondered why someone didn't just shoot the Huntsman. What secret could Cutter hold? Update soon!

Please continue. The huntsman got shot! He is dead right?