Reviews for Enemy of my enemy |
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acetwolf94 chapter 27 . 10/19/2018 I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
Jyx The Berserk chapter 15 . 2/16/2017 He sees by UV light, anyone who saw the movies would know that. Even pitch darkness is lit up for Riddick. |
Soron66 chapter 3 . 12/4/2016 I always figured Riddick to be fighting the Xeno(s) not joining it(them). |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 27 . 11/10/2015 If you see a pair of active combatants without one of them being a dead body at the end of the scene, you've already met them in chapter one. Hah! Nice. It was a god sbort fic overall, but could use a look through for some typos and such that have probably been unnoticed for years. They're no big deal though. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 26 . 11/10/2015 Heh, well, the merc made a good effort at least. Another typo I found: The heavy gun slung casually over his shoulder. The gun casually over his shoulder. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 22 . 11/10/2015 Dang, I was expecting Riddick to be the one who ahocked someone, that was a nice twist from a intelligent security chief. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 17 . 11/9/2015 Hah, classic one liner. I'm almost expecting a teacup or similar kill now. Riddick taking one of the guards uniforms is a nice touch though. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 16 . 11/9/2015 Heh, that "slap" had confused me until I realized the marks would make him look like a victim. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 14 . 11/9/2015 Electrical engineer Xenomorphs. Well, crap. Or yay, I guess. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 12 . 11/9/2015 Yeah, misunderstandings jokes are hilarious. I actually might have found it funnier if he totally noticed the escaped alien, but was hoping they would ignore him back if he just played it chill. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 11 . 11/9/2015 I lol'd. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 10 . 11/9/2015 Huh, you'd think that would have been a point of note for the scientists. Or they thought the beast didn't eat the human because it wasn't ripe yet. Either one. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 8 . 11/9/2015 Welp, that lasted about as long as I expected. Let's see if he can get though some relationship counseling alive. The counselor that is. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 7 . 11/9/2015 Heh, I can almost imagine that blatant disregard for life for the pursuit of SCIENCE! to be understandable to Riddick. Though he prefers doing his killing for getting some peace and quiet. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 6 . 11/9/2015 Man, people just getting in your way of saying hi to a friend you haven't seen in awhile. Poor Riddick having to deal with keycard fetch quests... |