I don't think Harry killed Severus. I think he allows everyone to thinks so.

Excellent chapter! I like this idea for a story.

Oh, Peter, that was beautiful. I see in it many of the things that I and Kim used in the rpg and what I used in my one story, but I really like your explanation. It's a lot simpler than mine is turning out to be. I promise I won't steal any of it; I didn't even know you had this story.

One thing I particularly like is that James and Severus were friends. That's a very unique observation. And yet you still managed to come up with a reasonable explanation for Severus' treatment of Harry.

I don't know why people complain about your errors. I hardly noticed any at all, and they don't even deter from the reading of the story. Some people are just overly picky I guess.

Brilliant! That makes a better ending for the books than what I am afraid she will do.