I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

Now that...that's how you write a story...connections...very, very sad...write some more frontier, you rock at it...

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THAT WAS SO SAD! *sniffle* Poor Serif and Stagi! This was good though and I hope you keep up the good work.

Not bad, dude! I likey!

Aw, poor Serif. He doesn't know that Stagi's alive! I hope they find his spirit soon. Good luck getting Stagi to the Digital World, I'd love to see how you get him there. Creative license is so amusing isn't it? Update soon! Sorry this is the first time I've reviewed this one.

Nice touch with the sort of twin telepathy thing going on. WONDERFUL JOB and WRITE MORE SOON!

Very MYSTERIOUS! You're very good at adding mystery. Wonderful Job and WRITE MORE SOON!

This was WONDERFUL! Question: Who is petaldramon? Are you going to explain later? I love your story, but the chapters are a little short. WRITE MORE SOON!

Ah yes, throw the unsuspecting American exchange student into Japan, and then toss him into the Digi-world and see how he fares. As if that's not enough trauma for one kid, heap a soul-full of losing a twin/brother and then being forced to choose sides against either a digi-demon or the four Chosen. XD All in all, sounds like a great story!

I look forward to seeing just which one he chooses (or perhaps changes his mind in the middle?)...he's gonna have one heck of a story to tell someone when/if he ever gets back to America. Or the normal world. Whichever happens first. :D Keep up the great writing! The thickening plot is almost tangible. XD

Thank you for the credit in the name listings! This was a wonderful chapter and begs the question "what in the world HAPPENED to Serfif's mom and who told him before his brother called their aunt?" This is in quotations because I wanted to seperate the thought and review can't do bold. It raises a lot of questions and I can't WAIT to read more, so STUPENDOUS JOB and WRITE MORE SOON!

Ah yes, I see you've discovered the horrid habit that English has of condensing or "translating" (loosely put) the Japanese. Thanks for the translation of the names though - even though it has been a long time since I've seen Digimon. I miss the original ones, with Kai and T.K. english names, not sure about the original Jap.

Anyway, this is good, sounds like Serif has a few problems to sort out... XD And Stagi as well - perhaps he'll venture to the Digital World? Hah, that's all Serif needs, is for his twin to be a better digimon than him!

Of course they were fast to obey! Izumi's scary when she's mad!

It took me awhile to match names with the correct characters because I've only watched the American version. I find the comparisons on the two differences kind of funny: Junpei for J.P. and Tomoki for Tommy. The night mare was very informative.

GOOD JOB and WRITE MORE SOON! (You have been very good about regular updates, keep it up!)

nice, do you mind if I use the American Kid and his Digimon for my novel.

I like the 2nd chapter! It made me go back and reread the first one more carefully. So, Serif has a twin and he doesn't know where his twin is. When he was scared, he changed back. The plot thickens... This is wonderful and WRITE MORE SOON!