Me:I want to fuk u like an animal i want to feeling u from the inside.

This one is on the nice side.
Besides it is a central concern of most teenagers in the firs place!
Teenagers do much naughtier stuff out there!
Not to speak of so called adults!

I like the setup and that it's Her with the pressing problem.
It's just her stubbornness to wait that long to get relieved.

Good job. Excellent, now I get cookie dough.

:) i liked this

So cute and to use such a classic song. It fit in perfectly with the mood of the piece.

That would have been a funny title, if you know what I mean ;)

Fucking hot.

I liked it. It was good. Nice Job.

pst. put more detail when you're talking about sex. it's too limited. no offence but I can do better than that. more thrusting and more well whatever. the tent stuff is funny though.

... look... I'm sorry and I'm pretty sure you relize this by now, but I still have to say it... it's sort of a matter of principle with me...

again I'm sorry but...

THE SONG IS 'CLOSER' NOT 'I WANT TO FUCK YOU LIKE AN ANIMAL'!

I do apologize... that was from me and my stepmom(the best stepmom in the world and the reason I absolutely LOVE trent now)

... and, by the way, the story was bloody brilliant...

loved Ron singing 'Closer'...

so perfect...

Love ya,

Lilith

Heh. That was really cute. Ron was great comic relief and I enjoyed the interactions a lot! Great job!

sorry alex is it? didn't mean to be so harsh...its just it kinda ruined harry potter for me...i can never read it the same way again...but i do admit you write really well...and soz bout the goth comment - dont know why i said it...i'm one too.. ;)keep writing! - steve

While I don't think they would like you callig this fic "I Wanna Fuck You Like An Animal", I think they would have been perfectly fine with you calling it "Closer" (the actual name of the song)... so... if you post this anywhere else, I'd probably go with that title.

I enjoyed this fic quite a bit though. NIN is awesome. I saw them in November and they totally rocked! I only wish I hadn't drank so much, since I don't remember much about the last half of the show... damn... too much Yager or Jager... however the hell you spell it (I don't drink it much, I'm more of a Captain's girl...)

i thought it was really good!

do i get my cookie dough?

lol

This is a really good story. I would also like you to kindly ignore the f*cker who reviewed before me, I believe Steve is his name and being freaking retarded is his game. Anywho, this was a really good fic and I wouldn't mind some cookie dough now. I'm the fat kid in the glasses. But I left my trench coat in my locker, so you are just going to have to ask all the fat kids with glasses if they want cookie dough to find me!

Peace,

Yellow Moon