I love more would write about this pairing too! Last update of Asuma-Ino ffs were in 2016 :(

I love 's so vivid and real,Ino trying to figure what cigarettes do Asuma trying to feel Asuma presence once again,her memories of people need to write about this couple,I agree.

oh god this hurts so much.

I really love the way you wrote this and the whole idea of it. I wish more people would write about this pairing as well as you do!

It brought tears to my eyes... I love this pairing so much! Great story.

as i said in a review before, i don't get why ino fangirls don't find asumaino as addictive as sakura fangirls find kakasaku. i, for once, think that asumaino is a great pairing. _

i totally reveled in the angst that filled this fic; at the same time, i missed asuma. great job. _

This made me cry and I absolutely loved it! Great job!

That was powerful and beautifully-written. I hope to see you writing more of this pairing, or at least more angst; you pull it off very nicely.

~EspeonAngel

Odd, slightly disturbing pairing but well written.

Simple question - have you ever seen the movie: The Premonition. The ending, with the last case of cigarettes, reminded me of it. It's a very good story - very sad too. Just wondering if maybe that movie inspired this?

Dude. That story was POWERFUL, and I love you for it. I was skeptical when I first saw the pairing, but... Whoa. That was actually really, really, really great. I even have tears forming in my eyes, as silly as that sound (I'm emotinal, heh).

Hehe, I might (eventually) write a oneshot on these two, though it'd be one-sided as well, becuase I can only see Asuma with Kurenai. But still.

Great job on this oneshot, really. I like his reasons for not quitting, and I like that Ino began to pick up smoking as well. Keep up the great work!

I hate smoking... but you actually wrote it into a way I didn't cringe. I love the metaphors you used as well. fabby-lola!

Very short and sweet. I like the way you used colors and scent to add to your description, because sometimes, even the smallest thing like the color of a flower or the scent of a cigarette is enough to make us remember.

This is the first real time I've ever read about this pairing, and I have to say, I like the way you handled it.

Really liked your approach to Ino and Asuma, very good story telling. The smokes never mattered, just her memories. Ino was very mature in her reminscing too.

Great Job!

Wow...

That was so sad.

I loved it!

I'm faving it.

~Ja