Reviews for Unhappy Graduation Party
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2019
Good one.
riverrat1 chapter 1 . 4/25/2019
Right! Because when Harry is waking up he will not understand how he ended up in Severus's rooms...lol
Meralyin chapter 1 . 6/24/2016
PLEASE WRITE MOOOORE! THIS HAS THE POTENTIAL TO BE AN AMAZING STORY!
unadulteratedsin chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
nice nice nice
ManuscriptMaiden21 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Huh. I don't know whether to laugh or to cry... Good story though! :)
sevenphoenixtears chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Love this story :) Very funny and sweet but Severus certainly doesn't lose his sarcasm. Would love to read more drunk Harry or Snape. Thanks.
Raiise chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Ah very good :)
iGymnast chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
That was hilarious! I thought I was going to die laughing when Snape *admitted* he was *poisoning* Harry! That was the funniest thing I've read in...well...a long time! :) It was written so dryly that it was just absolutely hysterical! I love it!
Morphox chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
That was hilarous! One of the best one shots i've read! I a

can't hold back the giggles!

Morphox
b-nothing chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
amazing... i wixh it was slash tho lol

good fic
Yuffie's Ninja Insanity chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Ive read mostly all of your snape and harry oneshots and I have to say I love them all. Im sorry I didnt you a review for all of them..its 3 in the am and ready to sleep haha anywho awsome love them and cant waitto read more ttyl-YNI
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Ha that was funny and slightly angsty too. Really liked the whole 'your going to poison me' bit and then saying 'you should just admit it'! _ Oh and Snape getting exasperated over the fact of that and also asking why he was following him if that was the case :P lol not sure why i like those bitss but I do.

The ending was off though, it seemed like there should have been more to it than that, then again thinking about it from your pov i'm not entirely sure WHERE you could have taken this further...so nevermind.
Azure Teriques chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
This is like the only story I've read where Harry is drunk and the story is actually good...Well, i've only read about 3 or so, but your story is great!
Nirrti chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
Sarcasm is stating an obviously untrue statement in a condescending manner, in order to mockingly point out the obvious.

It is a verbal tone in which it is obvious from context that the speaker means the opposite of what he or she says.

Every instance of use in this fiction is incorrect.

Instead of “No one’s missing me, are they?”, a sarcastic comment would be "Oh and everyonde is missing me so much!"

There are many definitions on the web which are utterly wrong; this definition is correct. Just as with "irony", the majority of people misunderstand the meaning and assume that it connects generally to humour and scorn.

There appear to be several sentences with words missing or incorrect tenses as well.

Structurally, this is not really a story but it would be if you extended it to show the impact of this revelation. I cannot think of how you would do so without repeating the work of countless regurgitators though.

Spelling and word difference: Potions are vile but they come in vials.

smiles

Akinaria
patronous chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
I really really loved it. The way Snape and Harry interact is very good. The humor is there although in traces and that's just the way I like it.
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