| Reviews for Entwined Destinies |
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  Guest chapter 7 . 4/28/2019 It quest can you make sasufemnaru stories and make sakura nice it kinda boring to see rude and bashing sakura in every fanfic please |
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/14/2018 I thought she was having 4! Is the other baby ok? |
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/14/2018 After 18 hrs of labor I had to get a c-section. Not fun. My boy would not come out. I sympathize with her. Pro tip ladies you can ask for icicles instead of ice chips. I didn't know that at the time till my friend gave birth. So not fair |
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/14/2018 I wish I had a baby revival. Sadly my family lives in different states and countries :( Germany and Philippines and mexico. Sad everyone got a call instead |
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/14/2018 Baby books lol fun. Me and my husband had a bet. If it was a boy (his bet) he got t name it. If it was a girl (my bet) I got to name it... I lost. But damn I make adorable kids! Not even mad lol |
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/14/2018 While pregnant I wanted pizza with brownies on it. And skittles. Lots of skittles... And hot sauce on everything. You eat weird stuff lol |
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/14/2018 I know I comment a lot as I read. But it would suck to have sex one night and be pregnant. Took me a year. That's unfortunate. I mean they can do it while she's pregnant, but for me that was a turn off. Good thing I got a patient man. Lol |
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/14/2018 Ok few sentances in and she's dealing with morning sickness. For me it was morning/noon/night sickness XP ugh |
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/14/2018 Lol ya don't need a year to get married. You can go and get one a week if you do it thru the Justice of the Peace. I think. It's been a few years. DISCOUNT WEDDING FOR THE WIN! I'm sad there was no super punching :( Will sakura see sauske after her memory wipe and go gaga again? |
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/14/2018 TELL ME SAKURA GETS SUPER PUNCHED IN THE FACE BY TSUNADE! I'm not usually a fan of SAKURA bashing but you made her so unlikable lol good job. I like the time traveling sakura stories when she gets her shit together. Liking it but the cluttered paragraphs and fast pace could use work. I reccomend a beta to help with that. The story itself is interesting tho. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/14/2018 Ok I like how sauske kinda acts like his dad in this chapter. I always felt his dad was solid but soft for saueeks mom. Sorry I don't remember how to spell his dad's name. -.- this is why I'm not a naruto fan fiction writer. I know the names but butcher the Japanese spelling. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/14/2018 Sauske is very ooc. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/14/2018 Mac n cheese on pizza is good. Cici's serves it |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/14/2018 I'm on chapter 6, but you need to not add dialog from different people cluttered into one paragraph. Get a beta |
 Akamehime456 chapter 2 . 7/4/2017 Seems great |
