great story please add more chapters

this story is good are you going to add to it?

I was just re-reading some older fics on my favorite list when I came across this one.

There were tons of plot points where I went eww, but it all worked.

Soun and Akane being abusive and such does make sense.

I don't see why Ryouga would be Ranma's dad, but it works as well for this fic. Happi, Soun, and Genma were trying to arrange for Ranma to hate and fear and have even worse relationship with his biological family. I could see them arranging Ryouga and Nodoka's separation as well as their engineered hatred/abuse toward Ranma.

I like how you've go the family all together and such.

The few things that don't make sense though yet. Ucchan and all the other folks arranged to be with him...

Well maybe that was a plan so that Ranma would never trust an arranged marriage or something?

I like Ranma/Nabiki fics. You stopped it just as it was getting interesting.

I wasn't really fond of you bringing in Tenchi level opponents yet though. Well, they were mainly setting things up for later so it wasn't too bad.

The one bit that I was really mixed on this about? Ranma does like Nabiki and is healing in his regrowth. The Ranma/Nabiki though seems to need some more work some where. It's like the story and action is centered on Nabiki and Ranma hasn't really saved her or such. She is saving him... Well that works. It just seems like Ranma has a crush on her at the moment. His inner thoughts and feelings for her might be coming through in his actions toward her, but it just feels like when he does grow up that he'd have put her on a rather high pedestal.

Well, that's how I felt after reading it to this point. You've got the means to correct that with the cabit link though. I really wanted to see Ranma/Nabiki/Ranohki.

If the Amazon's align against the family, that's it for their little village... Which usually I don't mind if bad things happen to them... O.k. maybe instead of killing them or such, they could use tractor beams and force field on The Pools and make it rain cursed water over the entire former amazon village?

They are on the verge of deserving something like that as well as getting their forms locked as well.

Aggghhh, I need to know more, please add new chapters. I've been hooked from the start and I need to know what's next.

Great story do far! Please dont drop this! It really is a great story! Though i wish that it was kasumi instead of nabiki but it seems nabiki really wants to change thats good.

if a person is having a seizure the only thing you are supposed to do is remove any thing they might hurt themselves with from the area, restraining them, or putting something in their mouth can actually cause a great deal of harm

Hey, I love this story. R u ever gonna finish it?

Please update, you have a good one here.

This is really interesting and awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue!

Damn. That would be some messed up shit if Ryoga was really Ranma's father.. why hasn't his real father been mentioned before now why is Ryoga the SAME AGE as Ranma it doesn't make any since and sounds like something you just decided to add there but I guess it doesn't really matter since you never decided to continue the story.. it is a really great story though and I wish you would even just another chapter or a couple would be nice to read.

I love how you took the Ranma characters and twisted them slightly to make them serve your own evil purposes.

Also, is your evil laugh like muahaha or heh heh heh?

Please continue the storie I realy want to see how it ends

please continue. This is a good story, i wouldlike to see it end.

great story idea to bad this is a DEAD fic, would have loved to seen where you would have taken this.

Please write more chapter's for this story,I find that I like reading it.