Reviews for TOW What Will Be
dreamer 3097 chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
This is good
Caskettfan723 chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Great story, it's really a good way that lead Rachel up to leaving.
sn0zb0z chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
Great story! I like the end.
RainingSakuraPetals chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Wow! This was a very interesting idea. I like her panic over seeing the future, espicially with the credit cards.

As the latest reviewer said, very good grammar! I'm a total nazi over that sort of stuff, and nothing stood out to me.

~RainingSakuraPetals
writergal90 chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
I LOVED this story! It was great- really well written (great grammar) and I loved the plot and the whole idea for it. It was great.

~Steph
Dreem chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
great idea for the story!

is there going to be more?
MonicaKateBingCastle chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Aww I love this fic! Its so good! :)
Blebo92 chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
very good. it's kinda like an insight to how and why rach ran out on her wedding day. very nicely done.
Exintaris chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Not bad at all - I like the way her visions of the future range back and forth.

Barry's just an orthodontist, he will hardly live in a "mansion", any more than the Greens and Gellers do. A mansion should be something like an English country house of many rooms, even separate wings.

The one thing this doesn't allow for is the flashback.
katie chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
very interesting. update soon!
rachgreengeller chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
one word awesome!