Reviews for Luminous
Bread-Making-Viking chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
Wow, this was really well written. Seriously awesome fic. Jim and Pam were so cute and I loved the way that you wrote everyone else into it with sub-plots and original characters, too. Nice job!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 22 . 6/24/2009
ahh! no time to review! must keep reading!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 20 . 6/24/2009
oh my god! a jam baby! how perfect! i love how everyone came to help them move in - even stanley and his significant other! i'm so glad kelly and ryan are back together, but what happened at the end? i'll find out soon enough...
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 18 . 6/24/2009
that was such an adorable proposal! i love the after-party, too! it's too bad about kelly and ryan, but this way she'll proabably go to nyc, get her dream job back, live the life that's right for her. she can't find her own jim there!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 17 . 6/24/2009
you've seriously done wonders! all the characters are friends now, they have each others back! i want to work for the 'new' michael scott!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 16 . 6/24/2009
so sweet!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 15 . 6/24/2009
oh my god! the ladies lunch was adorable! i can't believe what a supportive group they were for each other. too cute. and i just love the 'new angela'. way to go chris!

also, i love where you're taking the JAM relationship. it's so sweet!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 14 . 6/24/2009
i still can't believe that chris affected everyone so positively like this - in one week! amazing. and the ladies lunch thing is adorable. it's a great side of angela to see. loved the date at central park, too. perfect per usual :)
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 13 . 6/24/2009
adorable as usual. i love how jan is acting so normal and i don't know, sane? it's a great side of her to see!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 12 . 6/24/2009
i knew i could count on you to make me happy again! that was perfect, as usual. i love the description of all of them in their fancy clothes. i'm sorry, i'm just not praising you enough. this story is so spectacularly perfect! in every way. i'm serious. you've made every character turn into a perfect person, without us readers stopping and wondering what just happened. you seem to write with such ease, this really is a pleasure to read. i'm sorry if this doesn't sound sincere, i'm really trying to be.

btw, chris is an excellent addition to the office, i love her so much!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 11 . 6/24/2009
i love this! all the characters are progressing so nicely, and almost all because of chris! that's amazing.

my only complaint is jim and pam. you left them on such a bitter note, even though she's on a date, they typically could have had some humor about it. well, you'll probably fix it soon!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 10 . 6/24/2009
wow! from chris' outburst to the finally bit with jim and pam embracing (which frankly i'm confused about - pam says she's not ready for anything more then friendship, then they act like friends plus a BIT more, a couple times) that was pretty impressive how you fit so much in one chapter without it feeling rushed. i'm am so impressed how you can do that. nice work!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 8 . 6/24/2009
so sweet. i liked the sensitive side of michael and the phone date!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 6 . 6/24/2009
adorable, that's all i've got!
pamelamorganhalpert chapter 4 . 6/24/2009
YES YES YES YES YES! that made me SO happy. go pam.

forget anything i said.

THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY EVER!

i'm really excited, if you can tell.

but seriously. how can you not love a story that has pam realizing she loves jim, and leaving roy... all before casino night. i'm in love with your story!
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