a veces la gente ma interpreta lo que otros realizan ya sea para bien o para mal y cuando se expulso al gran bat no se penso en eso.

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Thank you for this very very good story Thanks for writing

"I simply know that friends sometimes fight." Wow excellent thought. I'm not convinced of it coming from Batman, but nonetheless, really thoughful !

Wow, that was SUCH a good story. I love how you showed Batman's priorities like that. You had them both nicely in-character. Good job!

On the grammar side, you wrote: "Oracle is an information gather..." when it should be "gatherer" (Yes, it IS a word!)

Well done.

Well said!

Superb stuff. You got under the skin of Bruce perfectly. The dialogue was very well handled and I love the ending. Kept me gripped from start to finish (which came too soon! But always leave them wanting more is a good thing!)

This story rocked! 'nuff said! :O)

I thought that this was a pretty good story, although I think Batman's kinda creepy.

Hey, great job Shoikana. I like the other one w/ Nightwing too, but this was even better. The way you showed us Batman's thoughts was very well done, and made a lot of sense.

After I read the summary I thought it was going into yaoi... but I was wrong... Oh well... o.o Anywayz, nice fan fic. It was well written and very dark and angsty. Good job..

A very compelling look at the events that were in the JLA. Very well written, plese continue the story, possibly with the other leaguers

You got everything down pat. Except one thing. Superman didn't give Batman a red Kryptonite ring. There never was one. He gave him a green Kryptonite ring, that Superman confescated from Lex Luthor. Just thought you should know.