Poor doctor light.
You have the worst timing.

Woah 3

...Increíble

Wuau no tengo las palabras. Eso fue muy intenso.

Xd por un momento pensé que Speedy estaba enamorado de jinx
Xd algún día quiero ver una historia de celos Flinx- speedy XD

;u; 3

..wuo que intenso

Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! w Al fin! 3

Y Jinx pensó que kid flash era rico? Argent es la millonaria aqui! XD

HEEEEEEEEEEERRMOSOOOOOOO 3

Eso fue taaaaaaan genial

...Wuo
Me alegra en verdad que no la borraras pues me gustó mucho que se centrara en el pensamiento de jinx y lo que quería hacer

It wasn't bad but there were a number of errors in the beginning. Also not sure yet whether the 1st person POV works or not. We'll just have to wait and read.

Hello! I just want to let you know that I started reading this story when I was in probably 6th or 7th grade. Back in 2007-2008ish. I, literally last night, finished rewatching the Teen Titans series, and with watching Titans Together, I remembered your story. I didn't remember the name, author, or what it was about. All I remembered was that I LOVED it a lot, and 'that one chapter where Jinx recounts what happens as each minute goes by.' And I'd been scouring Archives looking for this story, hoping desperately the author hadn't taken it down. I skimmed through this, chapter by chapter, and finally found the 'minute by minute' recount. I, quite literally, screamed.
This is such an incredible story. Right now, I've only reread the first chapter. But I'm so excited to see it finally competed, and I'm anxiously reading through the rest of it. You have done a mighty fine job on this story.
I look forward to reading your other works.
Apologies for the long review. Have a good day. :)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww