Reviews for Cause and Effect
Louise chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Hey,

Just found your work, and I love it this story - its all tingly.
Cede-Lede chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Gruff teddy bear Jayne is love.
eternallycharmed chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
This was so beautifully written. How Jayne makes the nightmares go away for River and how he tries so hard to remain gruff and uncaring, but she sees right through him. I love your Rayne and your Crazy-River Imagery. Kudos on the awesome. ;)
Found you chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
You would make a good pirate. similes and all. the first part made me sad. the second... I don't like how you point out that Simon's helpdrugs. I don't like it 'cause it's true. not entirely because well he's Simon, but to River... well I hope you know what I'm trying to say 'cause it's real hard to explain.

excuse me while I say AWW!

oh my god. that was so beautiful. tearing. this has got to be my favorite firefly fic. ever. every word. so perfectly placed. to give just the right... all I can think of saying is thank you.
AgentRusco chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
I'm not a fan of the pairing per se. But I LOVE this. You certainly caught River. Wowo, really, very nicely done.
Aladailey chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
...

I really have no idea why you aren't on my Favorite Authors list yet.

I really love your ships. All of them. Every single last one of them. Well, save Lost because I haven't watched that and Lord of the Rings because I don't really read fanfiction for that.

But otherwise?

Yeah. I love how you ship, I love how you /write/.

What I mostly love is how you portray Jayne in this. I find that most Rayne authors start outt good and then Jayne gets all... I dunno. Un Jayne-like in the end.

This is a good Jayne. And a good River.

Just a good Rayne in general.

Brilliant job. )

-ala
Skychaser chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
Just got around to reading this, and I'm glad I did. It was beautiful...absolutely beautiful. It makes me feel so serene and peaceful. All the things that River embodies. I know I've probably said this before, but I think I like your "Crazy-River Imagery" the best. You do such a wonderous job with so little.

Skychaser
Azamiko chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
bugchicklv chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Oh, just lovely. Really-I like how you paint River's world with your words.
Sarah chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Loved it!
LittleBookOfCalm chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Love it
Saxifrace v. 2 chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
This story is love.

Brilliant brilliant brilliant and beautiful.

That's all I can say.