The Story concept is good. Funny spelling on stuffs though. And if you follow Canon it's okay to skip some scene, but swapping perspective in a single chapter make things a bit messy.

nice story will there be a sequel to it?

a sequel would be nice or at least a epilogue

I love this!

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Great story, Like the idea and the storytelling's above the average usually found on FFN.

I know you apologised for the spelling, and I haven't checked through the other reviews yet to see if they've commented, but the only food i know that fits the description of the one in SEED that goes with chili sauce or yougart sauce is a Doner Kebab. Filthy food, horribly greasy, but amazing after a night out getting wrecked! Hope that helps.

(PS. Cagalli and Andrew are both wrong, Doner is Lamb (mostly) and so it should have mint sauce! [In my opinion :P])

Great story can you fill all the parts inbetween your chapters. it makes so much more fun.

I'll be honest great writeing but please choose 1 or the other. either write the entire thing third perosn or 1st person. DON'T KEEP SWITCHING BETWEEN THE TWO.

other wise great story.

Loved it ! Amazing story !

I never did like that whore, Flay.

do a sequel! and do a gsd one as the sequel! that would be awesome.

have u seen it? im watching it at the moment and i already can see a part that would be hilarious.

im on a high so i'll tell you. in one part athrun is at a hotel, he wakes up to find meer (fake lacus) in his bed sleeping. he falls out of bed and then i can see kira bursting in to see Meer in athrun's bed and Athrun sitting nect to her. that added up equeals a vert pissed off kira! heheh...just a suggestion.

sorry for that...i've had a bit too much sugar and my family and freinds look abit worried, oh well

cya

tye kousetsu

hehe, im reading this coz a friend said it was excellent. and she was right/

man it is great.

cya

tye

just finished chapy 2. nice start, there are lil points where the story didn't make sense xD but other than that, it was awesome in my opinion.

i rly hope that this fic is athrunXgirl kira xD i will continue reading -suddenly my stomach growls- hehehe "" dinner calls ...

anyway, it's going to my favs. and keep up the good work :]

cool :)

actually in the show kira and cagalli look just like their mother via hibiki exept cagalli is blond and kira even to know he had his genes altered he

still would look the same as his twin sister cagalli.

hey awsome job with killing the pink bitch! and NO you will not kill kira. and YES you are going to write a sequel...(Eye twiches in background) or i'll hunt you down and WILL gut you with a dull knife...sharingan youkai sighning off!