Awwww. I love love love this story! I love how you wrote about tenten's past and how the story is so sweet but not the type that would make you sick haha. Loved it!

Awwwwwwwwwww! This is soooo sweet!

Aaaaaaawwwwwwwww

Lovely awesome

Cute

I loved it dawg! Totally captivating

So...did he get his vision back?

Wow being blind sucks

'0' -shocked face
That was EPIC. 6 chapters and I'm already gonna start looking to see if there's a sequel. If there isn't, could you maybe make one? It's reaallly good!

"I had to become blind to open my eyes." *squeal* I totally melted when I read that line, even though Tenten thinks its cliche :) That line, and "He saw her heart, and how it beat for him." Absolutely beautiful, just like every other chapter in this wonderfulmarvelousamazing fanfic. Ah, a good romance always leaves me grinning crazily for the rest of the day! And good humor always has me laughing internally for a long while. And good writing...well, it's hard to come by, but it is so worth it when you do come by it. I love this story to itty bitty pieces (just like I love NejiTen!) You truly are a talented writer, and you did a fantastic job with this. Thank you for making my day!

I love how you portray Neji and Tenten's relationship in this chapter. It's as if they understand each other perfectly, like the best of friends, with a dose of something more :) This version of Tenten's backstory is really intriguing, too. It hasn't escaped my attention that the manga/anime only show Neji and Lee flashbacks! Anyways, great job handling the dramatic Tsunade meeting! Like I said, you truly are wonderful at mixing a bunch of different emotional elements into a single story...and it really works!

Neji and umbrellas. Neji and cats. But most of all, Neji and Tenten. This chapter was so cute! I feel all lovely and gushy and tender inside... Okay! Onward to the next brilliant chapter!

"My mother shall bake us cookies and we can have pillow fights and stay up late talking about our feelings-" AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH - Best. Line. Ever! Lee is so Adorkable :) And Neji and Tenten holding hands made me squeal ;D

You balance humor and romance and drama brilliantly! One second, I was laughing my socks off over Gai and Lee's antics (the sunset and pose-striking is so THEM! And the dialogue was wonderfultastic)...and the next second, I was going "OMG what's happening to Neji? Ahhhhh! Noooooo! I must find out what happens next!" I love your portrayal of Team Gai - it's very authentic and in-character. Alright - off to Chapter 2! YAY!

WOW! THIS WAS SO AMAZING! Neji was such a sweetheart :) It bothers me how you know nothing about Tenten really in the series. Anywhoo, I truly enjoyed this. GREAT JOB!