Reviews for Letters |
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![]() ![]() ![]() interesting letters |
![]() ![]() Nice fic! i just have to ask tho...is there a reason you spelled yours yrs? just out of curiosity. Is it cos you don;t know how to spell it, cos i don't think i can either. anywho, great job, keep writing! |
![]() ![]() I loved it! It was really funny. I was laughing the whole time. Also, I've always wondered what P.S. stands for! Now I know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job! I am really enjoying it. I look foward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hooray! That was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved your story, it has really great voice and you keep them in character. It would be awesome if you continued through all her years as a page. great job, Katy |
![]() ![]() Hey there! Great story! I was hooked by the premise, but this was very well executed. Nice pace and enough detail and backstory to keep it real. Really good voice too. I thought that you really nailed Neal's. I like that there was a story arc too. One thing though: with post being such a luxury in those Tortall (or at least a serious pain the butt), it doesn't seem likely that they would send such short notes as you have them do sometimes. An understandable plot devise, but still, tough on maintaining plausibility. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And he is where I shamelessly give you reviews. I wanna know the letters between them throughout all of her years! Please? |
![]() ![]() Brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() rofl...this is hilarious...i love it please keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() i accept begs but expect a bad review i have to watch my new kitten and he hasn't quite worked out the differnce between OW! and play it hurts i love your story and i did my own version of it what do you think? i love it, you really did them justice wil you continue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I actually haven't read your stuff for awhile, but it was very nice coming back to my account and seeing that your skill has only flourished. Truly, you are a great writer! I loved how you captured the spirits of Dom and Neal - a difficult task indeed, and your portrayal of them is commendable! This story has so much potential, and I would be begrieved if you didn't continue it! Good luck with everything, and I hope you can find the time to satiate the obssessive desires of your readers. LMAO Brilliant, absolutely delightful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very impressive, I think you have captured both thises characters well. Letters are a very difficult genre so well done. |
![]() ![]() Very nice. Very believable. Very- OK, back to the review, and away from the shameless compliments (I have multiple personalities, if you didn't notice). Overall, I'd have to say that this was really good. I don't really believe that the letters would be that short and close together. They're all deliviered by hand, and Kel only wrote to her parents perhaps once every two months. However, both Neal and Dom are both very in character, and the books you obviously know very well (so do I, actually). Only one other thing I want to say. How much *is* Dom collecting? Cheers, and update soon! -Tuna Fish |
![]() ![]() Why aren't there updates? I love this story! Please, Please, PLEASE update. |