And here you leave the story-the wonderful, creative story that I only just found.
Sigh.
Thank you for sharing the idea for as far as you went with it, anyway. :) It was enjoyable.

Amazing story! I can't wait for more! :)

No don't leave it there, its too good a fic to just stop, please update!

Well, even if it is a cliffie, at least it has dramatic flair.

Amber eyes, eh? So is Skoll linked to the Fire Nation, then? That could be why he was willing to hide their Houshu on his island.

Stealing souls and faces actually also has some link to the old superstition that if you have an image of someone's face you can use it to control them. That's the purpose of voodoo dolls, the reason vampires supposedly don't have a reflection, and is played upon in 'The Portrait of Dorian Gray' (a very cool, if very creepy, book). Some peoples forbade the use of mirrors because you could supposedly trap a person's soul in them.

this story is soo freaking awesome! please update soon!

~*~loves~*~

Fourteen chapters after starting this, I'm left a bit at a loss for words on what to review. I guess that is what I get for coming late to the fandomparty. So much has happened! You have a real talent for moving a story along quickly and suspensfully, which is always a must for the action/adventure genre.

I think that the scene which really stands out as my favorite is Yue's aid of Sokka. Yue and Sokka are so gorgeously tragic together. I think Season 2 doesn't play the loss of Sokka's true love up enough.

I look forward to more. :)

OMFG, write the next chapter. NOW. I can't wait.

So, is it safe to assume Koh will be making his appearence in the next chapter? XD

i hope you don't mind me adding this to my C2. if you do, tell me and i'll take it down

Your cliffhangers have gotten meaner if anything. -scowls-

I loved the Shing/Yori flashback - very nice insight into their past and their present relationship. -waves Shing/Yori shipper flag- Hotspur, Jakia, and now you... and I never thought I'd ship an OC relationship.

The Zuko, Katara interaction was very well done. It makes me happy to see them get alone without the risk of Zutara.

And the actions of Aang and Iroh were very IC. But I am sorta skeptical about how Shing got the upperhand so quickly. It is Aang and Iroh, but you did say that they weren't planning on fighting at the risk of killing Yori... I'll reserve judgement for now.

Lei's death was shocking; even though she's just a puppet I felt rather sorry for her.

Omg, is Yori going to be the sacrifice?

Very cool chapter. Update soon, my friend. The suspense is killing me.

Oh gosh, that was so sad and beautiful and you better keep writing because I'm literally shaking! You are a true genius, the Yue/Sokka scene saddened me but the ending enthralled me.

Poor Yori, I know it's what she wanted but wow, Shing upsets me!

Sniffle, this chapter made me cry. It reminds me of the Opera Turandot when Liu the slave gives her life for her master. Zuko and Katara team up and the danger still is growing. Wow, must keep reading.

You are such a liar. Excellent chapter, though. You should update very, VERY soon. Like now. Now would be good.

theres a thrill in writing cliff hangers that nothing can destroy. lol. i used to love leaving cliff hangers, open ends and stuff like that. but then i stopped writing so much -.-U

another great chapter!