| Reviews for On the outside |
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  Merianne Maelwys chapter 1 . 6/29/2009 ... Heyitwas actually original! AND enjoyable, YAY! |
 AnimeAmber chapter 1 . 8/21/2006 Me like more please :) can't wait! |
| funkycool chapter 1 . 3/27/2006 oo wow, powerful beginning, very fast- paced and action built. i like it a lot. i also like how well marie knows jason, like when she writes "Jason put down the letter and look behind you." update soon! xox |
