I’m pretty sure there’s no brownstones across the street from the Waldorf, but I’ll attribute it to hyperbole on Elizabeth’s part. Yay for the NYU and Fordham shoutouts!

oh! a different sort of confrontation! love it!

Geez I didn’t pay attention at all this class because of this fic. I was shaking half of the fic because of the pure ust and crying over your beautiful writing.
Thank you so much for this fic

thanks for sharing this! ｄ

MUY BUENA HISTORIA

okie dokie...then..

hey, nice start - a bit heavy on the narrative, but good contrast with the dialogue at the end. what do you think about giving the text a bit more breathing space (how can you add some different form of writing to make it more dynamic)? plus there is a bit of incongurency on the paragraph beginning "It was the day that the Elliots were cleaning out their beloved brownstone, w -" they seem to be living in 3 different places a mini castle (neverland to brownstone to penthouse) i'm a little confused...

OH MY GOD! I just re-read this, and I have to say that your writing is truly phenomenal. All the texture, color, wordplay, detail, etc. I just fell in love with your writing. This is officially one of my favorite fanfics on this website!

Oh man. Why have I not read this before? It's amazing! :)

Cool story.

in words, i simply can not convey how much i love this! can you believe it, three and half years after finally completing this amazing story? ;)

i love it. and i love you for writing this, and i wish you all the best (L)

I HAVE STARTED AND FINISHED ALL 17 OF YOUR CHAPTERS IN ONE DAY. I AM A HUGE FAN, YOUR WRITTING IS OF A LEVEL THAT FAR OVERCOMES THOSE OF OTHER AUTHORS IN FANFICTION. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I DON'T HAVE A BOOK TO READ AT PRESENT AND MY PARENTS WON'T TAKE ME TO A BOOKSTORE SO I NEED YOU TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.

really great story

loved it, thanks for sharring

Oh my goodness. The passion in this was just beautiful. Like.. that fight they had? And all the UNRESOLVED SEXUAL TENSION? GAH. My heart was so unstable as I was reading this, lol. But of course, it was such a good read. Yay!