Reviews for Perhaps Fate
naash chapter 10 . 5/17
this story will always be my favourite in ffnet. i always look back to this whenever i need inspiration or reason to remember why i love to write.

this stories induces all sorts of emotions and linger days after i finish reading it.

you're a fantastic writer.

I'm interested to know if you'd ever published anything. because I'd buy all your books.
potstickers4lyfe chapter 10 . 1/2/2019
Wait, I'm kinda confused. So did Tenten die or something in the eighth year?
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 9 . 11/18/2017
Think this is the second time I've read this story, the first time must have been years ago because I didn't realised I read this already until halfway haha. Really glad I've found it again and was able to read it again.
If you don't mind, can you explain something to me?
What happened at the very end? Thought Neji and tenten didn't see each other again but last paragraph implied that she's is with him, tracing his scars. Also you mentioned that it's been a year since tenten carried him back but you also mentioned that ten years has pass so I'm confused here. If you can clarify this for me, would really appreciate it. Thanks for the story!
Chisa Chispa chapter 10 . 7/22/2017
This is so sad :'( I want to cry.
Cam chapter 10 . 3/16/2017
Such a good book awwww
anon049 chapter 10 . 9/11/2016
I never got to do a review, despite this being one of the best nejiten fits I read. I was listening to Battlefield (nightcore) when reading this. Anyway this is such a well written angst fic and I love it. the only thing that would make me a lot happier with this fic is if nejiten happened in the end or what happened to tenten was revealed to neji.
KNO chapter 10 . 12/28/2014
So well done! I thoroughly enjoyed finishing this . . . at three in the morning.
And I'm sure this is strange, but I really liked that Neji and Tenten weren't together in the end-though I do wonder what happened to her-was she killed or did she just decide never to see him again? Anyway, it seemed very . . . fitting with how the story as a whole had gone. I really liked it, thank you for writing.
TheAlteredHope chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
I really like this.
Caramelized chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
the raw emotion you had going on throughout the story stayed consistent up into this chapter.
the ending was sad, but it fit.
wonderful job on this fic :).
xxcandylover23xx chapter 10 . 6/18/2013
Omg, I'm in love with this plz continue!
ohbeautifuldelilah chapter 10 . 4/22/2013
This has been, by far, the most emotional I have ever been after reading a fanfiction. I have screamed, cried, cursed, and simply was left hurt throughout this whole story. It has hurt me so much I'm not sure how I could even say that it was in a positive way but... it was, truthfully. Your narration is perfect, as well as your plot which I can't help but say is really just an immense mix of everything bittersweet and nostalgic. The characters are accurate, wonderfully so, and even if Tenten and Neji were both full of angst and longing, I believe no other fanfiction has depicted most, if not all, the truths to the life of a true shinobi as painstakingly gentle as you did and still managed to leave its reader holding on to NejiTen. This is indeed nothing short of a masterpiece, and I think a little part of me could endure the unspoken status of Neji and Tenten's relationship more now that this has left me with the knowledge that even if either of them passes away, they won't really be separated-not ever. This has been a breathtaking fanfiction and I am looking forward to more of your works!
MusicAngel13 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Alittle confuse but good
HoneyHyuuga chapter 10 . 8/13/2012
heartbreaking and sad but most of all beautiful. It killed me insidd the way Tenten behaves towards Neji idk how he did to face that (strenght of his love for her?) :) It was well written, i love it *happy tears*
i luv music chapter 10 . 5/8/2012
aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww thats so romantic so so hot and stubborn as i review i am complimenting you so romance although sad YAY

that was totally awsome

i want love and i want your revenge you and me could write a bad romance

i want your love and love is revenge you me could write a bad romance h

oh caught is a bad romance 2x

rah rah ah ah ah

roma roma ma

gaga ooh la la

i want your romance-mance

copy from bad romance lady gaga thn chippet style
Midnight Insomniac chapter 10 . 12/25/2011
Sad, but beautiful all the same.

Keep writing!

~M.I.
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