*sniffles*

absolutely gorgeous.

i know you published this months ago, but i just read it for the first time and all i can say is wow! this is deep, sad, and felt very real- awesome job

I liked how the POV from the girl's and your description of Dean was very insightful. Some of the phrasing really stood out to me, like and Well done!

Hope this isn't a one-shot. Cause if it is, I'm gonna hunt ya down and kill ya. THis is good by the way. THere are lots of stories like this where Dean has this wife and kid stashed away somewhere, but few of those fics are as well written as this. I love the way you use the woman's POV to really show what she thinks of Dean and all that. And the surprise ending was quite the kicker.

All I can say is Wow! *takes deep breath and exhales*

And I love the little boys name..Alec! Like Jensen in D.A. LOL

That is so good. Oh my god. I think I'm crying and I don't know why.

*blink*...okay, there's definitely more, right?-)

This is the best DeanOC fic I've read so far because it goes into more than just another-orginal-girl-who's-with-one-of-the-boys. The baby sounds cute, and I'd love for you to continue with this. I look forward to your next posts! ]

It was good, but um...I'm a little confused. Was the first part with Cassie and Dean or just some random girl? And what was the part with John about? Like I said, pretty good. Catch ya on the flip side.

WOW!

Great story! Really liked it! :)