A well done fanfiction for Kanon, and yes, people he did marry Makoto, or however you spell it. But shes a fox, and she ran off into the woods. She was a miracle, and it ended. Plus, he ends up with Ayu in the manga, novels, and somewhat in the show. But anyway, a very well done adaptation and good that you kept them in character

Wow! This was really good. i like how you managed to keep Ayu and Yuuichi together without Nayuki getting hurt. *Thinks back to the anime series (especially 2002 version)...poor Nayuki. Good job too keeping the time line correct, as Mai and Sayuri would be in college already. Kaori was a little out of character, as she would never be that nice to Jun or actually like Jun, but i can understand this change, as i felt sorry for him.

he's already married to makoto

Aw! That was so sweet! D Great job!

aw... cute.

this made me smile. good job on this.

One nitpick: Ayu's full name is Tsukimiya Ayu (you spelled "Tsukumiya"). ;)

Other than that, that was quite faithful to the anime's storyline - for example, I notice Mai and Sayuri aren't there (as noted from Kanon Kazahana). The characters are very much in character (most notably, Jun crying over the muffler business XDD). It's a cute extension to an already great story, and it flows very smoothly.

Also, in response to your "localize the Kanon anime!" statement, I'd rather have them translate the upcoming remake, which is so going to rock. w

I'm suprised to find a good piece of Kanon fanfiction. You did pretty well keeping everyone in character and it's written well.

If Kanon ever was adapted to English, I can't imagine anyone being able to capture Ayu's and Nayuki's voices, so it sounds fitting in English. But it'd still be good to see a dub.