You really seem to have nailed some of their deepest fears. I especially like how you handled Lucy, pointing out that she only gets scared when she's alone, so most people think she's fearless. For myself, I think I most relate to Susan's fear, so her section really hit home for me.

This was a wonderful way of showing what each Pevensie sibling fears, thank you for writing and sharing it.

-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.

I really love the way you set this story up, with its four parts of four paragraphs, detailing what each of them were afraid of and how coming back to England has made them change.

I think the most powerful line in the piece (besides the final ending point, of course) is this: "Lucy is back to being afraid of spiders because it's expected of her, not because she actually is."

Sapphireswimming

D: This is so wonderfully written D: Especially Edmund's DX

I read a fic about what happened AFTER they died. But this is perfect for how she found out. Fantastic work.

The meaningful stories,the ones you can think about,have always been my favorite kind of story to read, but its the author who puts in the emotion. I believe you did that. Thanks for a great story!

Interesting.

Failure, fear, loneliness, being wrong.

I never really boiled it down before, but you have nicely!

woah... this is so PERFECT. I loved all of them! but Edmund is ... different, I think.

rock on !

HQJ

Loved it...

Luna

Awesome story. It's so very true - each of their fears is exactly what I would pick them to be. Well done!

Wow! Another great fic from you. I'm assuming the telegram is to tell Susan that the others died in the train crash? This was extremely insightful into the thoughts of each character and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Nice job.

Wow...this was deep. I liked the reasons for Edmund, Peter, and Lucy. It really portrays their character and who they are. Susan's fear is completely understandable, but I wish that she wouldn't just follow everyone else. I can completely understand her siblings' anger and I agree with them. Though being wrong isn't a good feeling, if we're always right we never learn anything at all do we? I do hope she gets over this fear...and doesn't succumb to peer pressure and forget her family...

All in all, this was good. Very well written.

. ~Saira

thats really good. i really like it

ahh it was Susan that got me. Wonderful work; a study on fear.. hmm... it's quite interesting to think about. Would you hate me if I maybe wrote a Harry Potter fic based off this idea of fears? It's just such a great idea... but tell me if you'd rather I not.

**Duckies

have i reviewed before? cuz i know i read it, cuz i went back and printed it out and keep it by my bed and reread it so often i almost have it memorized...ok, i'm not quite that bad. this one is so beautifuly amazing!

Shadow