This was great

too funny

I had fun reading this! :3

YES~!

well...five years later I'm reading this but too bad. I liked it.

Awwww...this was sweet! :D Poor Cloud, though; with friends like Zack, who needs enemies? XP

Haha this was hilarious, I loved this fic -

CUTE! _ GREAT FIC!

Whattaya mean "Microscopic" hints at Cloud/Zack ... ? It's totally obvious all over the place: Zack's constant attention, Cloud trying to suppress purring, his observation of "The man he admired the most was idly chatting with the other man he admired and loved the most," Zack arranging to be on 2nd watch with him. Not only adorable premise, it's written well, no grammatical mistakes, cute dialog. You are more than capable of an equally adorable sequel ... where they give up the denial and just admit they love the fake bickering, and each other! Cuteness rules.

haha this fic is wicked silly silly zack... so.. ya he would of totally blown off Clouds head o.O'

That was so heartwarming! It's hard not to feel bad for Cloud...I can't relate though, my hair becomes straighter then a ruler when wet. Anyways, definetly a favorite, I love your writing of Zack!

Cute! That was purely adorable! X3 A companion fic would be most loved.

Aw... curly chocobo hair? How cute! I really liked this! Very nice. And yes, companion fic sounds wonderful! If it hasn't already been done... I think I'll see! *goes to look for companion fic*

Poor CLoud! Very amusing! For a second there I thought Sephiroth was going to do it!

Cute. Nice how Zack wanted to make his whole head curly. Great Job and this was really quite funny and interesting. 8D

Cloudy's hair is so cute! Great fic!