Damn, it is saddening to see this was written in 2006! Little hope of continuation. Loved it though. The quiet and the unbidden moments. Sasuke being tactile and Naruto needing it, still both silent.

That chapter was simply fabulous. In fact, the whole story is so well written it hurts. And I mean it: it makes me feel so sad and numb at the same time. The way you describe Naruto's pain, his despair, the emptiness he feels… God, it makes my heart ache. Honestly.

I also like how there are so few words spoken. It adds to the heavy atmosphere, if I can say it like this. That was your first attempt at yaoi? Well, it was great! It was not some meaningless smut, it was full of emotions, of confused feelings and needs. The repetition of ‘more’ and the ambiguity on who said it, if it was spoken or only thought made the scene really intense. Yeah, I’m awestruck. Completely addicted. Your story truly is wonderful.

You can guess I will be waiting eagerly for next chapter.

i love this story it's so good! really well written also :)

Well done, are so interesting,so alive!

oh my... angsty... and terribly addictive

That was really good. Emotions well written and well I liked it very much!

Update soon

lovely...just...love it.

-dark

Very very hot. Intensly enjoyable. I hope you write more! -

Beautifully written. It seems like that's how all the fics go, with the two eventually becoming distant. I mean, I thinks it's what would really happen but it's all too sad.

oh it's so sad But I want more! YEAH! MORE ANGST! and a happy ending, that's it, or else I'll cry~

I loved Sasuke's frustration... Naruto doesn't want his pity... nor comfort. The only thing left was his affection... But I'm not sure why Naruto accepted that -that way, I mean-. Maybe it was because Sasuke isn't good on showing affection? Or is it because those displays of affection can be easily mistaken by comfort?

I guess Naruto would feel much better if he let Sasuke comfort him. I mean, an utterly important person to him died, but it doesn't mean he should ignore the living. After all, Sasuke is an important person to him as well, isn't he? :P

Anyway, update soon. ah! your first attempt at yaoi was successful! congrats _

~Thyphy

This is gold!

So glad you updated and can't wait to read more.

~Mirai

So good. I love it. Please update soon. I'm addicted to this story!

You’re first attempt? Well then, well done; that was one of the hottest and yet deepest scenes I’ve read of this genre. Whilst I generally hate character death – it makes me sad – the motivation behind their actions seems flawless. I can’t wait to see how this develops. Please keep writing! You're a wonderful author.

Yes, very good attempt at yaoi. Me likey...update soon...oh and yes the update was fast enough

wow this is your first? your doing such a wonderful job this chapter was so intense as were the feelings with it i can't wait to see more !