that was so cute! you should make a second one !

That was so good if you can would you mind making another one like that it was so good and exciting it was a awesome story

Awwwwww

I like your explanation. Nothing fancy, and something that actually works when you think of things like hermaphrodites.

I love this :) I read it so fast - I was really captivated great job, you should be proud :)

So cool !

The ending seems rather abrupt. There are still questions, like if Heisui will still go to school, or play with Kaijin, or fight with Okibi. When he becomes the official prince, and it's announced to the whole fire nation, things would definitely have changed for Heisui. And what about the new baby? It was inferred that Sokka might be pregnant.

Overall, this was a great story. I loved how you portrayed everyone, though I kinda wish we had gotten an update on Aang, Katara, and Aori.

I really enjoyed this story, though, and look forward to the side-stories.

awwww sweet ending!

This cajun is wondering when you be updating mon ami. tis a good story, yes? Why did you stop and mark it complete if it is not.

O_O i kind of dont like you now...

I know right they really need to get laid like seriously!

D'aaaaaawwwww. That was a sweet ending. Now, I've got to browse your profile even more for those stories, I need more! haha.

That was epic, the perfect time for the Sokka Zuko big reveal! Or, that's what I've been calling it in my mind while reading this. I had this gigantic grin on my face as soon as Zuko reached the front door of Sokka's house, it even got so bad that my mom looked at me wierd and my brother started shouting about how the Joker had struck. :P

Awww...it's over. :( But YAY! HAPPY ENDINGS! FUZZINEES ALL AROUND AND FTW!

NO! YOU'RE CONVERTING ME TO A ZUKKA FAN! NOOOOOOO! I LIKE ZUTARA! NOOOOOOOO!