Oh, this is powerful, cleverly-written stuff. Simple and effective. LOVE it.

Brilliant! I loved your view on Draco's mindset. I do think though, that you need to make sure you keep up the clear deeper meaning through out the fic. Great ending. Great expresion of the presence of fellow characters, and i loved the hold of a dark and depressive atmosphere.

Thanx for you review by the way, and i love that poem.

I'll be sure to read more of your work!

Great story. I love the Lord of the Rings poem.

not bad