Wow! That was an amazing story you wrote! I am a huge fan of the immortal which I too thought i was the only one who liked the show. I'm so glad that finally there's a story here where goodwin isn't acting like an idiot like the writers of the show made him out to be. Again, I loved your story. You should write more! :)

Well I've never read any "Immortal" fics. I just happened to notice there were some and thought "Cool I'll read one". I only saw a few episodes before it was cancelled but liked it. I'd love to find someone who had them on tape I could get copies from. This story was very well written and I enjoyed it alot. Thanks for writing it!

Wow! That was a MUCH better version of the "Kiyomi falling in the pond" story than the one I wrote! Then again, I'm just happy I'm no longer the only writer for this section! AWESOME story! Love it! VERY well written! (better than mine ;P ) I was worried I really was the only geek out there who actually liked the immortal! The show had potential with their ideas, it was the writers who wrote it so lamely! They should have hired you instead! Awesome job! LOVED it!