I know this is abandoned but I loved the Hermione and Harry of this story! the fact that you simply let us forgot about Ron(whom i dislike) was also a great positive. Would love an update even if its highly unlikely

Enjoying the story. Would you say you need to have above average intelligence to really understand be able to use your magic system? I can't see Crabbe and Goyle and maybe a few others getting in to this Hogwarts.

Thoth was Egyptian

I enjoyed this story a lot, but these are not the actions of 11 year olds. I know it's a different society and these are supposed to be geniuses, but there's a limit to emotional maturity. I also can't imagine any teacher, Snape or not, forming such a collegial relationship with someone of that age. Having taught 11 year olds, they're still fairly childish. Hannah's the only one that acts anywhere near appropriately. Neville, for instance, acts like someone around 15-6. At 11, most children aren't thinking with their dicks near that much. I'm not saying they're all behaving well, but their poor behaviour is that of people nearing the end of high school. Maybe you should've aged Hogwarts students up to 14.

I feel the need to review this despite the fact that it’s been 8 years since an update. I love the story so far. However for a piece of advice for the author if he/she ever writes in the future is to perhaps explain certain things in the world a little better. I understand it’s from Harry’s perspective and the idea is that we only know as much as he does, however there are moments where something is explained and yet I still find myself lost when it is brought up later and for some reason Harry at that point knows more, than I do.

DeiStarr you have described almost exactly how amazed I feel about how much this story has been such a welcome change to almost every story out there. I would also like to say this story may very well have changed my tastes in fanfiction for a long time.

I just want to be the 900th review...

Isn't thoth the egyptian god of wisdom?

Awesome story, hope you finish it one day.

Since you expressed a desire to have errors pointed out to you, 'concequences' should be 'consequences'.

I gotta say, I'm really loving this story, your world building is my favorite part but the rivalry between Harry and Hermione is a close second. I like the different takes you have on the characters as well, nice change.

I think that this has some potential but I am ignoring the jesus thing as it rubs me the wrong way.

Hey, pretty awesome unfinished fic here. If you ever come back to read this, feel no need to work on this man. Just read what's been created since you left. There's been some good shit.

This is incredible! You've altered the Magical World - and the characters - so completely that this isn't even AU; it's AR - Alternate Reality. (Alternate Universes are essentially the same universe as canon, but with one or more different choices or circumstances altered that result in a butterfly effect of changes; Alternate Realities are just that - a world where reality itself is fundamentally different from canon.)

I am completely blown away by your creativity, and entranced by the incredible world you've created; enthralled by the characters, their interactions, and the storyline itself. This is so well-written, so interesting, and if it was a physical book I'd say that I couldn't put it down - I couldn't stop reading it; desperate to know what happened next and hungry for more.

Will you ever consider continuing this? It's beyond perfect; leaving it unfinished is a tragedy, and a crime against the fandom for depriving the world of fanfiction of the rest of your brilliance. I can't even begin to tell you how much I adore you for writing this, and I'll do almost anything if it will convince you to continue it.

I LIKE this Hermione. Very down-to-earth. Speaks with all the colours of a vomit-clad mosaic wall covered in gang signs.