Reviews for Lines in the Clouds |
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MyWorldHeartBeating chapter 1 . 5/13 Decided to come back to this story again, since it was a fun read! :D |
zevrine chapter 19 . 7/2/2019 Thanks the story is very good. Very inspirational. |
laelruin chapter 19 . 1/23/2018 Fantastic story! What did she need to hold onto the Shikon for though? These last few chapters had me in tears. Thank you for a wonderful story. Sincerely, L |
DJmiso chapter 11 . 12/15/2016 no. this story is perfect. i like the sesshoumaru you portray. he's sad, melancholy, different from the seas i am used to, but it's different and nice. and yer writing is very refreshing. makes me feel a little inferior with my writing, actually, but i guess everyone has their own writing styles. |
Cyrish chapter 19 . 11/16/2016 Wait.. So Kagome dies? Is that what you meant by writing: "Kagome thought he was only talking about the war"? He was talking about her death, wasn't he? And is that also why you wrote: "His child" instead of "their child" coz she will soon die? WHYYY AAAHHHHHH *wails* |
Shaish chapter 19 . 11/10/2016 I'm not crying your crying. fDSjkfls. Thank you very much for writing this. It's so beautiful. 3 |
Shaish chapter 15 . 11/10/2016 fdskfjdskfjsdl. I loveeee. |
Shaish chapter 11 . 11/10/2016 I think it's interesting, and the progression is interesting. |
Shaish chapter 9 . 11/10/2016 Oh man. That was eerie. |
Shaish chapter 7 . 11/10/2016 This is interesting. I love how...mature? Kagome seems. Her and Inuyasha seem older, and that comes across really well. I love how you're writing Sesshoumaru too. He's still stiff and intimidating and calculating, but you've managed to fit in those moments where he's...LESS of that, and more brought down to their earthy level, rather than in the clouds where he seems to be most of the time. I like it. I loved seeing him interact with Kagome's family, too. XD 3 |
Shaish chapter 4 . 11/10/2016 Ahhhhhhhh. I'm tearing up. ;-; |
Shaish chapter 2 . 11/10/2016 AHHHHHHHHH. |
Shaish chapter 1 . 11/10/2016 OH BOY. |
Salome Maranya chapter 19 . 8/29/2016 Beautiful. Thank you. |
Last Breath chapter 5 . 8/21/2016 Right now I am listen to Symphony No. 9 ~ Beethoven and the way Sesshomaru felt to the library is how I feel towards books! |