Reviews for Snow On the Leaves |
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Rainmy chapter 1 . 4/9/2010 I HATE reading poetry but this one was pretty (: |
Lenn.n.n chapter 1 . 4/30/2009 For some reason, I find this poem to be very upsetting; I can almost feel the forest's loss. So many things come to mind-the loss of childhood, the loss of a special moment or place that you held dear, the ruination of innocence...even the loss of a parent's child. Word of advice: never, never, ever show this poem to a mother or father who has lost a child. Not unless you want to see someone cry very hard. |
comptine chapter 1 . 7/7/2007 that was amazing i can't say anything else it was to good |
GamZeeKarKat chapter 1 . 2/1/2006 you are good at poetry...unlike me |
Vladimir the Hamster chapter 1 . 1/15/2006 A really beautiful poem! I really like how soothing it is. Reminds me of the time I was watching the snow fall... Gah, I love snow. I love Kokiri... I love your poem! It seems like the Lost Woods dies every winter. There's something beautiful about that... |
Steeple333 chapter 1 . 1/6/2006 Oh, that was so beautiful! The summery was awesome, too D I really like this , the rhythm is so good, it gives the same effect as if it rhymed (rhyme and rhythm look too similar. _ I always mispell it, or think I did). It's so pretty, it's such a nice, sweet poem. I would say bittersweet, but it's not that sad... |
Black Triforce chapter 1 . 1/5/2006 (sniffles) That was really great. It really tugs at your heart... |