This second story had a much tighter pace. I liked the action and heard your message througout. Nice combination of the varying love interests. It'd be nice to see another story!

enjoyed story thank you

enjoyed story thanks

Hello,

So, I doubt that you still check this account, as this story was written years ago. I haven’t been very active in the fanfiction world lately, but something always brings me back to your wonderful story. I feel like I need to read this at a different point for the rest of my life, and my love for this will never waiver. I just wanted to let you know, that this remains one of my favorite fanfics to ever read, and I just wanted to let you know that someone out there is still supporting you and your work. I will always be the person who makes sure that your writing is appreciated, I’m still waiting for that original piece.

UptownGirl2007–I no longer remember my old pen name, but clearly I’ve outgrown it.

suspenseful never a dull moment very well written I look forward to other pieces of your works

I honestly can't remember what I wrote the last time I read this story, but I felt a need to review this entire series as a whole, considering I just re-read the series. I felt that I was not doing your story justice if I didn't review again, because I am older than I was before I have a new found respect for your stories. I started reading this story over five years ago, and it has remained one, if not, my favorite fanfictions of all times! I love how you built on the characters (and added some of your own) that J.K. Rowling made us love, cherish, and admire. I love pretty much everything about this story, and I can't believe it took me this long to come back and review again. I don't know if you'll see this anytime soon, but I just wanted to make sure I showed my appreciation for your story again.

Its been a pleasure...and a nice long journey.
PinkandGreenWhiteRedBlack07

Still waiting for that new story...its been almost four years!

Question about the repetition of the -drip- sound: Is that supposed to mean that this is all part of Harry's afterlife? Like that brief interlude when Harry was living in an alternate life where he was a sub-par student and rather spoiled?

Surprised that a whole new battle erupted after everything had finally settled down. Very interesting chapter :)

Saw your author's note asking about the humor. You aren't being hilarious, but then, that wouldn't fit this story. This isn't a Three Stooges type of story. Or even a Colbert Report. It's a serious story and the humor has to be found within that framework.

These chapters are real and very human. As I said in my previous comment, I don't really like it when an author drags out an ending beyond a chapter or two after the climax, but it doesn't feel dragged out. So, I think this is quite good.

Considering the length of your story and the high quality of the writing (plus this being a HP fandom, and not a crossover), I'm surprised at how few reviews this has gotten. This definitely deserves more.

I usually don't like it when stories drag out the post-climax wrap up, but I've enjoyed how this has gone after things have finished.

I'm not a fan of vampires being innately more powerful than wizards, at least not those less than a century old as Draco seemed to be as soon as he was turned, but I loved what you did with the centaurs.

This was a fitting end to Dumbledore. Much better than being simply AK'd by Snape.

aw not the one of the only brothers in the book

read both stories. amazing originality . good character depth. humor was good, I would have liked more of it also some were just too lame. many typos n grammatical stories. on the whole , it was absolutely worth reading. keep it up.

Great fic, although it took me a long time to get through the last few chapters.

I was initially going to complain about how forgiving Harry is - Gabriella leaves him several times, and each time, he just completely accepts it, and the same with Draco. But all your characters are like that, not just Harry (also, there is the whole love thing going on). So I guess I'm just a bitter teenager...

Several dropped or added speechmarks, but nothing else that I noticed and remembered.

Overall, definitely an awesome read, much fun, and looking forward to the epilogue (if it ever does come).

DFTBA

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Hooray! The vision (if it truly was for this time, and you aren't just being mean...) didn't come true, and now they're engaged!

WAY more action that the first, and I can't decide whether that's awesome or not, but either way, your writing is still great.

dftba

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