Reviews for Check and Mate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda cute :D |
![]() ![]() Great fic. By the way, Minerva is one year older than Tom. |
![]() ![]() ooh...that was very sweet:D I love the story! good work! maha |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's cute! I like it. I'm becoming fonder and fonder for this pairing as I read more stories like these. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic! I loved how you expressed their personalities, even if Tom Riddle was a lot more...human than what I imagined him to be. Tom/Minerva is a great pairing, even if she is a couple years old. It's nothing compared to the gap between Minerva and Dumbledore. Yeck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I adore this! I love TRMM and this just made my day! Theur lines were spot on, and I truly enjoyed it! Fantastic! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() You blended a slightly Ooc Tom with some of his more noticable canon traits. It makes for a good story, good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() (despite it being riddle) aw |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it! You've got the genre as romance/tragedy, but quite honestly I didn't find this tragic. At all. I still liked it though and I'm kind of glad it wasn't sad, I just thought I'd let you know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really REALLY good. I think I found a new favorite pairing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're on aren't you? I recognize the formatting at the top. Sometime ago, perhaps even a year or two, you reviewed one of my fic, and I'm simply returning the favor. I like surprises, so I went for this one. I may read more. I liked the structure for this fic. Not too much plot for a one-shot, not too PWP. I liked the pairing, too, although I wanted to bring up the question of McGonagall's age. She wasn't in school with Riddle, was she? It's been a while since I've caught up on my HP fanfiction, so I don't remember. Besides that, anyway, I liked the way you wrote Tom Riddle as well. You gave him the typical Slytherin attitude, but a little more polite, as he was attempting to get a kiss from Minerva. Perfect. I liked her, too, by the by; she seemed almost the same, only in a more young mind set. Thank you for the good fic; I think I'll put this on my favorites list-I like unorthodox pairing. Until next time. "I will return, for I am the darkness..." |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was brilliant . Yeah, I know, kinda late to review this story but I finished all my work in Career Ed so I decided to go read. I love the way you portrayed Minerva. Like a frigit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *jaw drop* That...was...cool! I only saw a few mistakes: "It them proceeded" "it was rather pleasantly" *shrug* that's it I think. I like how you made Minerva glower, you're so insane. I really liked this story! Good job! *claps* |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good! You should write a secon chap! Keep up the good work CONGRATS! |