My God I knew that was intense suffering Jess has been through but man that was hell.

What a happy ending for the lightning guardian.

i like Evanesence too!

brillient

Great chapter ; I'm glad that Jess has a family!

I liked very much this chapter. Will Jess forgive her mother? Can't wait for the next chappy!

OMG i read broken heart & LOVED IT! & i love this too! lol keep up the AWESOME work i cant wait for next chapter!

Hey asshole, it's not finished yet. Don't bitch at me.

I read Broken Heart and I liked it. This is also great, continue pls!

I thought I smelled an OC in that last fanfic... Look, all I'm getting out of this is who YOU as a character, in this Universe, would be (I checked out your profile the moment I started reading; dead similar to "Jess"). This isn't prose; where's the plot? The substance, the "in-character-ness"? Conflict, details, climax, resolution? I see none.

My dear, this is criticism. This is help. You're exercising your free speech and so am I: by helping you refine your exercise. I don't care if you write only three long chapters; if they have what I have listed, then good. But I feel like this is a re-hash of your profile with "minor" adjustments.