You son of a #-_#_- Stephen king dreamcatcher

just so you two are aware the common life expectancy of a naked Mole Rat is around 30 years you should google it

Very good!

I do have one complaint, and its the same as I've had on a few other stories around here:
When writing a KimXRon - leave Shego as nothing more than a friend, at all. It does not work and ruins it slightly for me. Either concentrate on KimXRon or concentrate on RonGo and have the other be nothing more than a friend/close friend. When you take it farther, things start to get OOC and confusing very quickly.

Further, Ron simply "caring deeply" for Shego immediately, despite their history, doesn't make sense, powers or not, especially with how angry he was with Kim - despite their connection being much stronger.

I really liked that you played Brick, Josh, and Tara as good characters - often they are portrayed as jerks in fics, even though there is no evidence from the show to suggest this is true (except for Brick once in Exchange, everywhere else he is shown to be nice).

I liked the writing style and plot progression, it didn't feel slow or boring.

Overall, I quite enjoyed this AU, even if it is a bit far fetched from the show.

Muy mal Monique ella dijo que mantendria el secreo, y va y saca un libro que revela todos los secretos de Ron
Eso no es una amiga:-(

Jajajaja como no supo que era una trampa, dos chicas en un centro comercial

Good Nice

I love this story, guys. I take it, that in this story's universe, that cousin Sean, and that while Stoppable/Starter wedding was not a part of the Bad Boy incident. He just turned into Zorpox and back again.

Other than that awesome first chapter.

OK, there is no way Kim would fail to notice the distinctive sound of a Harley, pulling into her driveway. She would have definitely noticed it over the sound of his scooter.

Okay seriously quit bringing up how oblivious guys can be about girls. Women can be just as oblivious as men. Besides Ron might stay with Brick of Felix for a while once the mission's done to have a brief vacation from Kim and Shego flirting with him. There is only so much torture a guy can handle.

Okay seriously I really hope Monique slaps the book down in front of the Possibles and has Kim pay close attention to the stuff about the maiden of light. Cause even Monique knows it's not her, otherwise Ron would've been happier.

Oh Kim, she has no clue that Ron's been in love with her for years.

Totally knew it. Cause whenever there's a hot guy that catches Kim's eye she will always throw Ron under the bus.

Family Lost, Ron's grandmother and dad. A friend shall pass, farewell Rufus that naked mole rat was loved by many. The prophecy has begun. I'm banking on Kim as the A Friend Shall Betray line.

Okay four of those points needed to be commas.