I'm not sure you'll ever see this, but I just want to say that this is the best fanfiction I've ever read. I think that this would make a great book if you fixed all the spelling errors. There's a lot of other things I could say, but I'll just finish by saying that you've written something beautiful, moving, and absolutely incredible. Thank you for giving the Fire Emblem fandom this work of art!

I reiterate what I stated earlier: This is awesome.

I can see why this is the best rated Fire Emblem Sacred Stones fic that doesn't borrow from other games. This is utterly amazing.

This is top tier fanfiction

...You left out the battle with Morva. ...Well, there's already been enough dead parents in this fanfic.

Oh, a Killer Lance! Nice. Good battle. Still, filler? Chapter 19? Hardly.

Yeah, I wonder what Amelia got. Ewan identified his, and I figured out Franz had a Light Brand even before it was announced. Based on the "throwing" part, I guess Ross has a Tomahawk. Figure Amelia needs a high-level lance as well...Brave Lance?

Also, way to rationalize the separation of 4 units from the rest at the start.

Ah, yes, I figured it was only a matter of time. That's one of the most touching A-supports, and it's only fitting that it's one of the few non-romantic A-levels that still results in a paired ending.

Yeah, the Gorgons are definitely among the most deadly. I'd rate them at #2 behind the Draco Zombies, or maybe #3-those Gwyllgis are pretty deadly with their speed. Deathgoyles are #4 for me, because they're almost as fast as Gwyllgis and have better defenses. I guess the Cyclopes are #5-they don't hit as hard as Elder Baels, but they have more HP and probably hit more often-Elder Baels have crap accuracy. I'll put Arch Mogalls 7th and Maelduins 8th simply because of Shadowshot; Arch Mogalls are too fragile to be threatening otherwise. Entombed and Wights are barely more threatening than the lesser Gargoyles (Mauthe Doogs don't rate as high among the lower-tier enemies because they can easily be one-shot...hell, Tarvos are actually among the more threatening low-tier enemies simply because of the HP.)

Wow. This just keeps getting better.

Okay that's not how the game works. *smirk* I love it.

Yeah, wow. Also, forgot to comment on Ewan wanting a horse. He can get one, but it's usually considered the worst of his potential promotions.

...Oh. I figured Franz would be promoting, but Amelia seems so strong as well. I wonder...did she stay a Recruit for 20 levels and is becoming a Paladin? Or did she become a Knight, and is now becoming a Great Knight? ...Right, she never got new armor. She stayed a Recruit. Well written, fitting game mechanics in so smoothly.

I almost accidentally skipped this chapter. Glad I realized my mistake. Best chapter yet; Amelia and Franz are both so badass now...Franz Is perfect for this, the lieutenant that was just a rookie when last in Renais.

Yeah...now that I think about it, the seizing of Renais probably deserved multiple chapters. FE6 sorrento at least two chapters in every location, more or less. I guess Nabata was only 1, but that's a side trip.