Pretty unique twist to a KxK romance. I like it :p

This was a very sensual and wonderfully written story. I like the gypsy and supernatural elements that you also included. Not only did they got the characters, but also added an extra appeal as well.

Also, I really liked how you paced the plot and the way you portrayed your characters. They were their canon counterparts and still had your own distinctive creative flair.

The only thing that I did not like about this were how there some inconsistencies like how everyone forgot about the boy with Misao and how easily it seemed Kaoru "accepted" Kenshin.

Other than that, you have a wonderful fic. I hope to see more from you!

This is a beautiful one-shot. Good job! Thanks!

Great story! I loved it!

aw! well if ur not gonna update anything, then u should then write another one shot and call it the sequel... plz? anyway, cute... vry cute! i love it! great job!

the lighter skin being more beautiful was a turn off. i mean- what the...?

wah so nice!

..love it!

Ok that last part totally confused me. So they were held somewhere? Even though I didnt fully understand, it was a somwhat good ending. I was hoping for more in the end but it was still very good. I really loved this story _ I truely wish you will continue this, but in ways its fine as it is... Until we talk again!

Ari chan

i luv the story! its original and interesting. there are some spelling mistakes but apart from that its really good.

Very enjoyable. Although some aspects of the story seemed a bit vague, perhaps you intended it that way to lend to the paranormal and mysterious nature of the piece? One the whole, a believable dark fic. _

that was nice

All I can say is WOW! I really enjoyed that! Can't wait to read more of your stories.

i love it plz write mroe son

I really liked it Good job!

i think that you should make a sequel to this. I lurv this story! XD