It was very creative, interesting and amazing because it was a very different and unique story line but I loved it and it kept me hooked.

ok o clock

-SMILE- hehehehe harry will find out~~~~

Ok it is near midnight where i am right now. I am tried and i need to watch my sick brother in the morning. Knowing all that i should be sleeping. However this story was so sweet and wonderful that i had to stay up and read it all.
Draco122

What happened to the frog did she cook it?

You know, for someone who was raised by muggles, spent the first 11 years of his life thinking that he was a muggle, and is dating a muggle born, Harry seems to know nothing of the muggle world and seem to be very anti-muggle. He mind as well be pureblood or a blood purist.

I notice you keep spelling sense like "since." Sense is more like a feeling. Common sense, It didn't make sense, I sensed you coming. Since is related to time/reason. It's been so long since I saw you, Since you're here..., I have no free time since I procrastinated on all my work.

"I was just hoping that when Ginny and I got married, everything would be different. That's the whole reason why I purposed to her, I was hoping things would take a turn for the better."
That is a recipe for disaster. Everything will be different, but most likely not better.

Why did Ginny suggest that Harry invites Hermione, when it is at least likely that it would lead to such situations?

Her daughter used to be 4, not 3, and Harry did figure it out, he just believed her when she denied it.
On the other hand, he should be able to figure out that she needed a boyfriend 5 years ago, not necessarily now. He was right that she wouldn't want to be separated for some months for a boyfriend if she had one now.

And what will she do now? Lie to her daughter her whole life? Tell her some years later she could have known her father?

It would be nice to know why she left him. Maybe you explain in later chapters.

As it is, it seems strange that she left without telling him, especially as he most likely wouldn't want his daughter to grow up without him.

Hermione is an idiot without an iota of common sense! This might as well be unintentional Hermione bashing! If I were harry Hermione would be getting the door slammed in her face!

I would love to see a sequel. The grammar needs a lot of work. A 4 year old child is a preschooler not toddler. The timeline was also all over the place. I would have loved to see how they were when they got together. When. Flashbacks would have been great too. I really loved the plot of this story. I always hated Ginny.

That was EXEMPLARY!

This has all the makings of a good story. I'll give you the final verdict anon.

D. Page Robin

buy another chacoalte frog and put it int he cage lol problem solved.

loves this story BTW it was funny but cute as well.