Reviews for An Honest Verse |
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nikkiRA chapter 1 . 9/28/2008 That was so sad and I honestly feel like I'm going to cry. Beautifully written, it was just amazing, so sad, oh my goodness. I actually don't even know what to say. Favouriting this doesn't seem like enough. jhdsfkjsdfhdslkfhdsf. This was great. The end. |
incsxpinay chapter 1 . 11/24/2005 that was so sad...it's brilliant! you captured a heartbroken girl's feelings perfectly. i loved the angst. i've seen this kind of plot in d/g stories where draco is forced to break up with ginny even though he still loves her, but i think you presented their feelings realistically. good job! |
Eve Granger chapter 1 . 11/24/2005 That was good. Sad and good! I liked it very much. I hope that you develope this story because it seems that it would be a great story instead of a oneshot! ~EvE~ |
iLUVfire chapter 1 . 11/23/2005 wah! THAT WAS SO SSAD! ::sniff:: |
Aleja21 chapter 1 . 11/23/2005 this is really good. i hope that their is more to come. |
MidnightBlue88 chapter 1 . 11/23/2005 I liked this, which is weird because I am a staunch Harry/Ginny shipper and I think most people bring Draco way OOC when they pair him with someone romantically. I think Draco may have been a touch OOC, but that's debatable because who knows what's really going on inside of him? I don't personally see him acting that way with anyone, even when he's in love, but that's just me. Anyway, I liked all the angst and the romance. Such a tragic situation and I wanted to scream at Ginny that he still loved her at the end. No, you didn't make me believe in Ginny/Draco, but you got about as close as anyone's gonna get :) Also, the POV changes threw me off a bit. Looking back, you did a good job differentiating between them, but while I was reading I got a bit confused. Maybe some dividers? You may not want to interrupt he flow, and it doesn't matter anyway since it wasn't hard to figure out after a bit of thought. So, nice job. Really enjoyed it. |