Aww god now I'm depressed... This is really good, and really freaking sad. It's hard to see Jazz in so much grief when he's always such a cheerful mech. This really broke my heart...

Love this fanfic. Few make me cry. Is this a song or poem. Thank you for writing !

If you would understand how much I cried because of reading this, you would have been standing in shock. It was just too good written to not cry of! You're so good at writing. :D

That was so sad! Every time someone mentioned not wanting one of those two to die it just left me heartbroken, and that ending! Oh, that ending. This is definitely one of the most emotional fics I've ever read.

too sad
i like it though

damn good, i actually had tears streaming down my face. too damn good...and too damn sad...

This was so beautiful! ;n;

this story made me cry so hard

I was blown away by this. It hit on such a personal level, I couldn't stop reading. It is beautiful and heartbreaking, and very well written. I was riveted by the emotion right from the start and cried through most of the piece. I can't even properly describe how this affected me. Very well done.

This fic took me a very long time to read because I'm crying so hard I can hardly see the screen in front of my face...Everytime I thought I had myself under control, I would read another sentence or two and break down again. Bravo on being able to extract such an emotional response in your writing

Omg. This story is so sad.

I cryied. *sniff*

But a great and awesome story..

oh my god... I'm crying... I sat and read this all night, and cried all night!

Very, very intensen and very touching. I have to say, even though it might take out a bit of the real life feeling, I just like those stories, there one of them will follow the other to death and be reunited with him. The story was well written. From sweet moments between Prowl and Jazz, the including of the twins who play a bigger role in this thorough until the moment Jazz learns the truth and his final moments. I like that this fic has not the solution of Jazz taking his life but more or less him not getting up anymore, leaving without any violence to his body.

I felt sorry for the twins but I liked the understanding they showed and how they decided to keep their memories for the future.

A well written and very, touching story indeed. Loved it so very much.

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /_\

Primus, this made me cry. It was just so moving, it really makes you think about the bond some people have. Jazz couldn't live without Prowl, that's the power of love baby! Great fanfic, absolutely lovely!

Very good story.