*sigh* what an amazing story! at first i was a little relunctant to read it beacause of the drugs and everything, some authors go overboard with the drug use, and depression and everything, but you didn't! it was just the right amout of angust and drama that i was looking for! I feel like i have to piont out that they were some mistakes here and there, but nothing to major to make me press the back button!

what really got to me was Shuichi's thoughts at the end, that was really good! i don't feel like it really needs a squeal but if you do write one i will sure be reading it!

i suddenly feel like i'm dreaming, 'cause your story was to good to be true! )

this was written by a dark and twisted soul...I LOVED IT!

Ok, i just read your story. I know, i know, it's been 3 years that she's complete but if you think to make a sequel go for it ! Shu reab and all that stuff, want to know ! By the way, it was a really good story ! Thank you !

Wow.

I don't know what else to say. I love the sickly knot I get in my stomach when I read this.

You've explained it so nicely! Minus the minor spelling/grammer mistakes, it's absolutely great.

I'm addicted to this fic now, I'm reading it for the 7th time I think.

Thanx for writing it.

Um, this is a little too extreme. I understand Hiro' reaction to saying, "Don't do it again" But honestly. I smoke pot all the time and I'm not some emotionally unstable person who's on a spinning wheel of dispair. I'm an honors collage student. I had thought that you had meant something like tweek or acid when you said hard drugs, but weed rarely creates such an addiction. The people who are addicted are mostly blank and mellow too, not hyper like Shuichi. Good story though, I'm going to keep reading it.

Please edit this! There are too many mistakes in this story to enjoy it. I'm sure it's wonderful and I can tell it has all the workings of being great...it's just so hard to get into a story when every other line has a mistake!

Love it!It was one of the best gravitation fan fiction I have read!

holy crap Im afraid to even go to the next chapter.

too damn good

This was a great ending to such a very sad beginning. I really didn't think that Shuichi would make it through, but let me tell you that I am happy that he did. Great story and I can't wait to read more!

wow...that was the most excellent-est-ist-est story i have ever read...how did you think up something like that? did it take long planning? or were you just bored one night? anyhoo, it was an extrememly good story!

JESUSFRIGGINCHRIST! HOLY FREAKIN CRAP, OHMYGOD! CAN THIS STORY BE ANY BETTER? OH MY GOD! I AM FIGHTING SLEEP SO HARD RIGHT NOW...but its winning. so i will finish this tomorrow. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR CREATING SOMETHING SO WONDERFUL!

oh...mygod! that was amazingly good! holy crap, and only the first chapter! this is now a favorite for me!:)

sorry i only reviewed ur last chapter but that was a really touching story, well written, and a good ending, i'm sad shuichi was so dependant on his "snow" and am just glad yuki found out in time, but i still can't believe it took so long for them to notice, is all of that true tho? could it really take so long for friends to notice and can a person really become so addicted, it's really sad.

nice fic, and i'm going to stop ranting since it's 4 in the morning and ur story has kinda put me in a trance (a good one, i'm transfixed and it keeps replaying in my head)

thanx 4 making my day/night and dedicating it, that was nice and maybe later i'll come back and review ur other chapters to tell you more of what i thought and why it was so good/just to give you more reviews

bye

kto/wasabi

you know, drugs are much worse than cutting, but it'a a good thing you have a clear understanding of the consequences of being on cocaine...it may be so very addicting but equally dangerous..

i think rehab runs longer...depends on the severity of the addiction...