Poor dears, they're really confused, aren't they?

lol this was hilarious

Well Victor obviously isn't good at lemon Lol

wonderfully written story, thank you so much for sharing~! :)

Cute I enjoyed it very much

Oh, this is so cute

"Oh! Victor's palm came to rest on something. It was firm, but rather soft. What is this? he asked himself. He prodded it a little before realizing it was the pillow on his side of the bed. Suddenly Victor blushed, realizing that he'd have to be a bit more careful with his investigative prodding-that could have been Victoria."

Hah! That was very evil, but hilarious.

Absolutely lovely :) the ending was so serine I could almost feel the happiness laced with romance. Keep up the good work :)

Haha! Well that was amusing! Yes I cannot see the characters doing "that" just yet. I was thinking as I was reading this chapter, that they couldn't do "it" because you wrote in your first book I read "Nine Months and Counting", that Victor and Victoria had been married like two years or so before Victoria consived of a child (Lydia right?).

Well that was a good story, and kind of an unexpected ending!

Very good!
Zachary Osgood

Geez, these two are just having such a difficult time, but then again, with their time period I'm sure it would be for a lot of people. Seeing how today I assume for people it's not so difficult seeing how the media and society plays a huge role on the means of influence.
It is awful to say, but it is pretty funny to read!

Zachary Osgood.

Huh, so Victoria did have some kind of "talk", and from Maudeline! Haha! She really really didn't seem to help much. Poor Victoria, just so skiddish about the first night.
Now, this is just a little suggestion, but maybe try to work in a way for Victoria to find out that the "corpse woman's" name is "Emily". Because the reader would probably expect that Victoria would know Emily's name.

Very good and kinda amusing,
Zachary Osgood

Greetings!
When I started reading this, based on the story description, I thought that their first night together was after Emily went to heaven, but then how you wrote that it was two weeks after, then it started to make sense to me.
Oh dear Lord, poor Victor! It would be pretty hard for a guy like him to get the "birds and the bees" talk! Geez, I wonder if Victoria got that same talk, however, I don't see finis or maudeline giving that little discussion.
Though I must say that I believe that even if Victor did marry Emily, I don't think they would do "that", even if they did, I don't think Emily being a corpse can conseive of a child.

Pretty good idea for a following story from the movie, I can't help but laugh a little as I'm reading about poor Victor!

Respectfully,
Zachary Osgood

:-) :-{

Yes, this probably isn't how a typical first wedding night is supposed to go, but at least Victoria was completely understanding and sympathetic towards Victor as she was when they first met. She is not upset with him in the least, like their parents probably would be if they learned what they actually did on this night.

Good story with this couple. I can't wait to read more of your stories when I have the time. :)

Their awkward conversation here reminds of the one they share when they first meet, when Victor struggles to say that they will be married the next day. But just like that scene, here Victoria is still calm, cool, and collected, and not at all confused or turned away by Victor's behavior. She knows exactly what he wants to say when he struggles to do so. She can handle his shyness, far more than Emily or anyone else he knows or ever knew could.