Reviews for Thy Kingdom Come
trishnjefflover chapter 12 . 11/9/2013
I love it u should make a sequel
NOhardyz chapter 12 . 4/1/2010
this is the best jeff hardy/trish fanfic that i have read so far. at first i didnt like that trish got pregnant, but i LOVED how you captured hardy's frustration when he found out and that he wasnt mad at her just, he just couldnt understand why would she run. i just wanted trish to abort it cause i couldnt picture the two of them (even if they were with other people) having a kid. but in Chapter 12, you won me over. i love how they both knew they didnt really know what to do but stick together and think about what just happened. that's realistic! and when she kept running into jeff, especially at the end, i just couldnt help but smile at that. lol

you can write! you had symbols, motifs, themes, static, dynamtic, literary devices omg YOU ARE TALENTED. fuckin brillant, romantic, lustful, romantic, did i mention romantic? fanfiction I LOVE THIS STORY! 5 STARS!
RatedRCouture chapter 12 . 1/23/2009
This story was amazing!
vanessasakura09 chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Wonderful story! I almost cried when I read Chapter 10-12!
Smp1991 chapter 12 . 12/20/2008
Awesome story i am completely overwhelmed by it EXCELLENT! *)
xFireSpritex chapter 12 . 7/18/2007
AH! I loved it! Yay for them coming together in the end! And the final paragraphs were perfect! *bows down*
xFireSpritex chapter 11 . 7/18/2007
I'm happy for them in the sense that they created something wonderful and very sad that she ran away and that Jeff is so torn up about it.
xFireSpritex chapter 10 . 7/18/2007
I think I know what's going on and I don't know if it's wonderful or not...nice cliffhanger there.
xFireSpritex chapter 9 . 7/18/2007
what's wrong with Trish? *worries*
xFireSpritex chapter 8 . 7/17/2007
I loved this chapter. I would read more but sleep is calling my name. Until later. I love this story fyi.
xFireSpritex chapter 7 . 7/17/2007
sometimes I wish you would write jeff as the desperate to tell everyone type but I love how you keep him consistent and he's so reassuring and sweet everytime. nice job.
xFireSpritex chapter 6 . 7/17/2007
the puddle you made me previously has expanded to make a puddle three times larger. dear god I adore your writing skills and your ability to write intimate scenes so well, something I feel I fail at. However you rock so therefore bonus points for you.
xFireSpritex chapter 5 . 7/17/2007
*points to the puddle on the floor* that's me! this chapter was so amazing...just wow.
xFireSpritex chapter 4 . 7/17/2007
Hooray for pulling the "I don't feel good" card! woot!
xFireSpritex chapter 3 . 7/17/2007
Silly Trish. Stay home with Jeff! I sure as heck would! Wonderful chapter darling
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