It still make me cry it very sad story and Peter will be with skylar forever.

If peter won't die he will stay with skyler forever in Neverland and be together Maybe they will be girlfriend and boyfriend and they might get married and they have a daughter.

I don't want Peter Pan die I love him so much when I saw it make me cry now I miss him so much I wanna hold his hand so tight and never let go of it.

Wow. That was...brilliant. I just read it after reading "Wendy" by Karen Wallace, and I feel so inspired by both the stories. YEAAH! Ahem.

This is an interesting twist to the Peter Pan story. Nobody really expects Peter to die before Wendy for Peter never seems to get old and is so young and heartful. The quality of writing is very good. The story teaches a good lesson about love and how it is never ending. It would have been interesting if this part of the story was included in the movies or books because it is a really good example of how powerful love can truly be.

Wow. I love it when prose have a line at the end that just punches me in the stomach. You've got that line. :)

WOW i have a lump in my throat how can you write like that? it's amazing a wonderfull story even if it's not really Peter Pan just a person with the same name. I love it!

aw this is the cutest thing in the world, and i just love the ending it is the most perfect ending in the world!

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THIS IS SO GOOD! I DON"T CARE IF IT'S NOT THE REAL PETER PAN THAT FLIES, THIS WAS SO GOOD AND SO SAD! I LOVE THIS! YOU ROCK!

*BAWL!* Poor poor Peter! WAH! I really love this story! But when did Peter start to grow up? Or is this another Peter, just with the same name? Confusing...oh, and you really need to do spell-check. So many mistakes. But i only noticed them the second time reading it. This is so sad...and sweet...and romantic...and sad...and...and...WWAH!

~frodoschick~

This is...I can't even explain how I feel about this. I almost cried at the end. I have someone who changed my life. Her name is Nadia, she's my best friend. For 9 years, we've been best friends. I can't even tell you how much she means to me. Thank you for writing this, because it reminds me just how much I love this girl. I'm only 18, but I know, I have known for two years, maybe three, that she will be my Maid of Honor. Thank you a gain for writing this, it really made my day.