Yeah I was wondering why Marlene was clinging onto loz. Your story makes sense. Glad to have read it.

Wow this was absolutely wonderful, got me near tears when Marlene was talking about missing her mother. Love the way you wrote Loz, this really touched me :D

It was cute, and rather sad. Cute for the interaction tween Marlene and Loz, and sad for the circumstances that they had to part ways , it also kind of fits the gap of the movie too :)

This is a cute story. The first chapter was really good, u like almost got me crying there! nice work:D

This was a very lovely and sweet story; I absolutely adored the way you portrayed Loz. Excellent job. _

Very nice. I like it. Great work!

This is such a sweet fanfic. I like the idea of them being friends and how they bond by having something they can both relate to.

I really enjoyed this. I've always been intrigued by the relationship between Loz and Marlene and I wish AC would have expanded on it a bit more. You portrayed it wonderfully.

Aw! I never even thought about that either! You're making me feel like I don't even pay attention to my stuff anymore! I really liked this, and I feel like I know a little bit more about Loz, besides the fact that he always gets picked on.

i like that a lot. very sweet

Nice work.

I thought there might be a followup showing Loz's discussion with the other two, but I love this fine without it. :) Aww, I like the idea of Loz holding Marlene back from the water! And him helping her get away. Very, very sweet and cute.

Loz probably is good with kids, alright, since he has the mindset of one. XD

Great work!

Aw, this is so cute! I've also wondered why Marlene clung to Loz in the Forgotten City. The idea of them bonding like this makes sense, and is adorable.

I have always wondered why Marlene hugged Loz's leg in the movie. I had a feeling she was scared of Kadaj, but in the church she was scared of Loz too. So, this makes so much sense, explaining how they became... well... friends in a way. Awesome story, I loved it.

Nope. The one luring the kids was Yazoo, actually. They show it.

I think all of the SHM have a very child- like quality to them... Whether it be because they're children themselves, or because they were never allowed to develop, we'll never know...

I liked it.