you totally should have finished this...

IamAnubis117

I doubt anyone reads these older reviews anymore, but I really wanted to review. I love this play! My school put it on last year, and I got the many parts of the Messenger/Constable/Townsperson/MargaretDouble. It was great, although I really wanted to play Beatrice. Anyway, I'm glad I found this, it brought back some really nice memories.

Please keep going i love it n h8 u I want more enough wif tha short chappies! JJ:P

I don't hate you. But... do you have an unhealthy obsession with Power Rangers? JK. I love Kim Possible so I shouldn't talk.

Intresting. im looking forward to your future chaps!

Well, I have to say, that was a *little* shorter than the last chapter! (teehee)

Welcome back to your story. I'd actually forgotten about it, but I'm glad you're adding to it again. Looking forward to more.

That was totaly cool.

Jenn

that was brillant!

PLEASE update soon!

not much plot movement... not much movement at all... in fact, it was quite boring. lol.

This was good to read. However, a lot of it is a reproduction of Much Ado - which is a great play, but possibly not the main point to your story. I think it would be more interesting if you could paraphrase parts and maybe only quote really crucial lines. I would like to see more J/S interaction and more of a focus on the play's effect on them rather than the play itself. Thanks.

I'll be honest, I wasn't sure about this story at first because of the short chapters, long wait between updates and the nagging suspicion that I've read this before (only it was Romeo and Juliet). But I stuck with it because I'm a sucker for 'before SG1' fics and I held out hope that this one might get better. So you can imagine my excitement when I see that this chapter is longer than 2 paragraphs only to be let down by the fact that it shows less imagination than the first 3. It required no thought or effort to further the plot, if there is a plot, of the story.

If I wanted to read Shakespeare, do you really thing I would be coming to

Hehehe... Great story! please update soon!

I'm glad you changed the play. Romeo and Juliet is so overdone and I love Much Ado About Nothing. I think the bantering between Benedick and Beatrice is great and could lead to some great interactions between Jack and Sam! Keep up the good work and update soon!

write the next chapter its been ages since you wrote and its on a cliff hanger so this is just unfair torture

me likey, keep'em commin' i love it when people just stick in odd characters that we never see on the show.