Reviews for Innocent Blue Eyes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() No, No, No, it's too too sad, I want to cry. Tat is died, it's impossible. he and Ryuichi were so happy together. Ryu is alone now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() TTTT That was just sad...wah! -cries to the extreme- WAH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Weell, here I am... a 13 years old criying like a crazy... hey! that was so sad... and I LOVED IT! I love angst stories! youre really amazing! I dont blame you for bad spelling, I have too.. -.-. Despite that, it was so beautiful! it was so... so... I dont have any words. Write something more about this, ne? I really liked it. |
![]() ![]() I am SO gonna show up at your house while you're sleeping and kill you, hang you, stab you 6 times, burn you, bring you back to life so I can do it all over again! |
![]() ![]() horrible ending, you suck |
![]() ![]() whoa, lame ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO!why did you kill him i hate this kinda endings!it was good but seriously why kill him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehe did you purposly made that letter rhyme...? |
![]() ![]() fuck the flamers your story made me cry, and that makes it a damn good one, can't wait to read the rest of your stories, you turned me on to the ryuXtatsu following :X and i love you for it xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was freakin depressing (tear) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh,so sad I like sad stories though,you know,sometimes you just need to for the spelling thing. When -I- wrote -my- first story -I- was in Seventh Grade,-I- didn't have spellcheck,and -I- was too lazy to go over it..and I got yelled at for it too,but those people have your best interest at heart,because your story is your baby,and you have to make it as good as it can be!The whole point of reviews is for people to tell you how to make it better,so if some one critizes you,thank them!It's only a flame if they yell at you becuase the characters are gay or something like YOU GO NINJA ON THEIR $$.Good story though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello hello dear. _ Seventh grade huh? Well, for being in seventh grade I am highly impressed with how you've written so far. I'm sorry for any flames you may have gotten and I agree that they are horrible and it's very unprofessional to do that. I am personally offended for you that people have the audacity to write such things when you are such a wonderful author as it is. I repeat that I'm impressed. As a freshman in college, to be completely sucked into a story written by a seventh grader is astonishing and amazing. (I is amazed) _~ I congradulate you on finishing the story, and even as much as I was very saddened by the way you killed off Tatsuha-kun, I loved your story. Keep up the good work! And.. I believe it is "psychiatrist". ~ ~Sesshisgirl (loyal fan and fic writer) |
![]() ![]() I hate you! Would it have killed you to give them a happy ending? And giving a warning for bad spelling in no excuse. There are plenty programs with spell check, USE IT! Now if you ever decide to redo this story, give Tatsuha a happy ending ok? |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHOEVER FLAMES THIS FIC CAN GO SCREW THEMSELVES! This rox. Omfg! Tat-chan died! -cries- It's so hard to find good fics on Tatsuha and Ryuichi, so THANK YOU! for writing this. I love it! I'm adding it to mai favorites. GOOD JOB! -~ILUVBBRAE~- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. In a strange way, I liked it. I hate having my favorite characters die (so sad) so I try to stray away from them, but I like how you presented it, so I decided to continue writing. Your style is very unique, and while you do have spelling errors, the way you portray the emotions of your characters is wonderful. So the incorrect spelling is okay, since everything else is awesome. The last line of the fic was simply beautiful. In an extremely, bring-tears-to-your-eyes kind of way. Even though I do like this fic a lot, I do hope you didn't kill off my absolute favorite character just to spite all of the people who commented on your spelling. I really hope that you had it planned out like this from the beginning. It would be really upsetting to know you only killed off characters just to be mean to everyone. But, I still did like the fic, so hopefully you will continue to write. Thanks for sharing! _ -x- LuV -x- |